假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

In my hometown there was a river. Many students go and swim there,

so my parents don’t allow me to do that. They consider swimming

dangerous because of I am very thin and weak. They are afraid

they may drown. One afternoon, my friend and I went out to play.

They played in the river happy while I just stood in the bank.

I really wanted to join them. At last, one friend offered to teach

me where to swim. After half hour, to my surprise, I could swim.

I was exciting.

某公司招聘英语秘书，包括下面所有内容, 字数100左右,

信的开头已给出（不计入总词数）参考词汇：秘书：secretary；操作 operate; 毕业graduate;

姓名 ：李华      性 别： 男           年龄 ：20岁

文化程度 ：高中   身体状况： 健 康   身 高： 1.78m

假如你是李华, 你在网上看到上面的招聘广告后, 用英文写一封求职信, 要求包括：     经 历： 曾在一家公司当过两年秘书

技 能： 1. 会操作电脑, 打字速度40个汉字/分钟

2. 擅长英语口语, 能用英语写作；曾在高中英语竞赛中获二等奖。

3. 会驾驶汽车

联系方式lihauwuhanhb@sina.com

Dear sir,

I’ve just learned from the internet that a secretary of English language ____________

____________________________________________________________________

If I am employed, I will work hard and try my best to do everything well.

Best wishes.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Great changes ______in his hometown in the last twenty years.

A．were taken place   B．have taken place    C．have been taken place    D．took place

Mo Yan was ______the Nobel Prize for his great contributions to literature.

A．offered           B．sent              C．awarded          D．supplied

We _______the letter yesterday, but it didn”t arrive.

A．must receive                           B．ought to receive

C．must have received                      D．ought to have received

You _______be hungry already—you had lunch only two hours ago.

A．can”t            B．wouldn”t         C．mustn’t          D．needn”t

Mary is going on a diet .  as she has put on _______recently.

A．weights           B．weight            C．a weight          D．the weight

The mother was trembling with anger . She ______her son and said nothing.

A．looked at          B．stared at          C．glanced at         D．glared at

Mother loves him so much that he can get _______he wants

A．whatever                             B．whichever

C．however                              D．whenever

How do you _______the show”s success?

A．answer for        B．leave for          C．account for        D．care for