短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I’m a student from Xinhua Middle School．I’m gladly to learn that you want a few part-time English reporter．I’m interesting in this opportunity．

　　I think I’m qualified in the job．As a student, I’ve read a lot and have a knowledge in many fields．I like English and do well in both spoken and writing．Beside, I’m easy to get along and enjoy working with others．I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station, but I’m sure I can do the job well if I got the position．

　　I’m looking forward to your reply．

Yours

Li Ling

短文改错

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。

One day, my whole family went to climb the big hill．My father and mother told my elder sister and I that the first one to get on the top of the hill would be give a toy．Hear this, we began to run up．At first I kept ahead, but a few minutes ago my sister was ahead me．However, I didn’t give up．I reached the top first in the end．We enjoy the beautiful scenery and had a picnic on the top of the hill, I was the most happiest one all the time, because I not only won a toy and also learnt that one shouldn’t give up easily．

短文改错

下列短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually．At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help．I went to see that was happening．I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many people were standing by without doing anything．Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly．I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety．To his great relief, the kid was saved．

　　I was proud what I had done．I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else in need．

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从十一处起)不计分。

Last summer I went to London for a holiday．I spent just the week there．While I am staying there I visited many places of interests．I also had lots of friendly talks with all kinds people．Then I found a very interesting thing there．One of my Chinese friends who have been lived in London told me that many English families like to buy new television sets．There are many shops where can lend you TV sets．The shops are often filled by a great many people．There they can borrow a TV set very easy, and it costs them only a little．Then it can be taken home or used for long．

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第十一处起)不计分。

Dear editor,

I’m a student come from a remote and poor village．Let me share you a touching story about my teacher, Ren Ying, which is in a wheelchair．She caught a serious disease and lose her ability to move in 1986, but she failed the college entrance examinations because of the handicap．After attempt suicide twice, she began self-study．Later, she run a school for children in the village．He has been a teacher and a headmaster for 12 years．Now our school has 6 grade and 200 students．

Yours,

LiHua

单句改错

You’d better take the old bridge as the new one is built．

单句改错

The soldiers fought in defend of their country’s safety．

单句改错

He injured his leg; however, he couldn’t play in the game．

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Tony approached Julia, touched her shoulder and kissed her on cheek．