短文改错

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中有10处错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。

We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low-carbon life．First, we’d better turn off lights if possibly and spent less time watching TV or surfing the Internet．Save water also matters a lot．Beside, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some of them, which will surely benefit from us a great deal．In addition, we suggest using handkerchief instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from cut down．More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contribute to a clean world．

短文改错

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Today is Sunday．The sky is full of sunshine; so does my life．At about 9∶00 a. m., I go to the bookstore with my friends．There was a lot of new books．I didn’t know which one to buy, because these books were all useful to me．At last, I chose two．At 10：00, we went to the cinema．The film calling Titanic was very popular．It took us about 3hours to see．Having seen a film, everyone was deeply moved．Some friends even burst into tear．From the story, I understand that love is noble but valuable．That’s a real wonderful film．It is well worth seeing again．

　　What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happy!

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，()并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy．He did not want share things with other people．For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place where I couldn’t find．Then he ate it all by himself．He never helped other．He said he is busy．That is, a game of tennis making him very busy．He did not care if something he did made people angry．For instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the morning．But he is difference now．He often helps grandma with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his classmate with their lessons．

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同旧式写的一下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词作斜线(\)划掉

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分．

Dear Robert,

　　Thank for your letter of May 12th．How glad I was when I get it．I'd be very happy to be your pen friends．Now allow me introduce myself to you．I'm a boy student aging seventeen, study in Senior Three of Hongqi High School．I'm a monitor of my class．I am about to take National Matriculation Entrance Examination after twenty days, that is, between June 7 and 8．You know．I want very much to be a doctor working for poor peasants that I try to make fully use of every hour and study far into the night every day．

Best wishes!

Yours truly

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不记分。

On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walk from one store to another, look for the clothes we would wear in the singing contests．While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortably rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting．Finally she found the suitable clothes．Deeply moving by what she did, we tried our best but won the first prize in the contest．Li Yue is always cares about the class．She often devotes her spare time in helping others．She has set good example to us．Therefore, she deserves the honor and we should learn from him．

短文改错

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When you are traveling abroad, it is importance to follow the customs of the country where you are visiting．If invited to a home in Britain, here is some advices．As soon as you were invited, it is good manners to refuse or accept the invitation, either by writing nor by telephoning．When you go to the party, it is polite to arrive at on time．It is good manners to shake hands to your host．You can take a present if you like, possible a bottle of wine, a box of chocolates or some flowers．However, it is no bad manners to take nothing．It is not polite to stay too late before the other guests have gone, of course．

短文改错

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。

This is a story told by my father：When I was boy, the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival．My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes．Once, I just couldn’t wait the Spring Festival dinner．As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me．Shake her head, she said, “It’s not a good time to do that,” I apologize and controlled me at the best till the dinner started．You know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month．

单句改错

Most people around the world now greet each other by shaking hand．

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