短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Tony,

Thank you for your letter．To tell you the truth, I’ve thought a lot of about whether you should buy a laptop computer help you with your study．In my opinion, you’d better not．For one reason, it’s very easy for you to develop some bad habit once you have it, such as playing computer games, see movies and so on, which will be a waste of time．For other reason, buying a laptop computer don’t mean you can study well．If you want to make a progress, you need to put your heart into your study but work hard．Whether you had a computer or not is not the most important．Do you agree to me? Looking forward to your reply!

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I firmly believe that everyone in the world loves their mother．So am I．My mother is a ordinary teacher．She always works hard, just as other mothers do every day．In fact, she isn’t good health．She had been suffering from arthritis(关节炎)for many years．Despite of this, she never stops working or giving up hope, I still remember the day when my mother accepted a card of congratulations for Teachers’ Day from her director．The card was read “Thank you for your hard works; Happy Teachers’ Day to you!” At that moment, I was so moving that tears came to my eyes．I am proud of my mother．

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10初语言错误，每句中最多有两处。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划－横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．至允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Mr．Johnson,

　　I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company．I am eager to being one of them．So I am writing the letter．My name is zhang HuA．I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health．I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University．I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English．I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well．

　　Beside, I know a little French．And in my spare time, I enjoy playing basketball．As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it．My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon．

短文改错

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Generally, we prefer to do things the way we considered to be the best．However, it is important to listen to those who love us and want to give us an advice when we have serious problems in our lives．Parents have gained some life experiences and they know what to act in different situations．That's why we should ask them for help first when they have problems．Therefore, there are moments when we avoid them and don't want to follow them．With time passed, my brother as well as I have realized that our parents are right．

　　Please turn for your parents when in trouble, for they worth trusting and ready to offer help all the time．

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该增加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正的词。

注意：1．原行没有错的不要改；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Mr．Li is a well-known doctor in our city．Kind but patient, he is always ready to do what he can help his patients．One day he learned from the medical magazine that patients will feel more pain if pleasant music is played to them．Soon he got an office in his own．So he decided to have beautifully music playing in his waiting-room．However, on one morning, an old lady who was sitting in the crowded waiting room became angry while listen to the music．She said, “We were all waiting to see the doctor, but he’s just playing the violin in his office instead of doing her work．”

短文改错

此题要求改正所给短文的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Helen was a twenty-years-old girl．She has never had a job before．Now she wanted to get a work．So she went to meet Mr．Black, the manager of hotel．Mr．Black told her it was getting very busy in the hotel at the evening．He ask her if she was interesting in a part-time job．The girl said that she did．Then Mr．Black said she had to work very fast and that she must be there at six every afternoon and work from six to ten, from Monday to Friday．He offered her with 4.5 dollars an hour．Hellen pleased with the offer and decided to start work the next day．

短文改错

文中共有10处错误．每句中最多两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从十一处起)不计分。

In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, richest man in the world, gave up studying in Harvard University, that is the most famous in the world．He set up a company and researching the computer software．As an old saying go, “Interest is the best teacher．” I quite agree with this idea．I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl．I got extreme interested in foreign cultures or customs．To meet me curiosity, I read in English stories every day．It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day．As a result, I always did very well in English exam．Interest is the key of success．

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir,

How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others．My roommate often held parties at night, made much noise．Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturbs me a lot．So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem．If you think in my position, I am sure he will agree that the only solution for me is get a room of my own, one not in the same building and as near to the school campus as possible．I would be gratefully if you could do me the favor．

Best wishes．

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming