短文改错

该文中共有十处错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties．The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese．My teacher advised me to keep diaries．I followed her advices．Happily it worked．Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English．One day I wrote a short story and showed it my teacher．She liked it very much that she read it to the class．Everyone said the story was the good one．I was great encouraged by their words．

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处

语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词．

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分．

Dear Tony,

　　Thank you for your letter．To tell you the truth, I've thought a lot of about whether you should buy a

　　laptop computer help you with your study．In my opinion, you'd better not．For one reason, it's very easy for you to develop some bad habit once you have it, such as playing computer games, see movies and so on, which will be a waste of time．For other reason, buying a laptop computer don't mean you can study well．If you want to make a progress, you need to put your heart into your study but work hard．Whether you had a computer or not is not the most important．Do you agree to me? Looking forward to your reply!

Li Hua

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词作斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Lu Ting,

　　I'm quite familiar your situation．With computers become more and more popular, some students cannot help playing online games and chat．It is not only a problem of wasting time, but a seriously problem for their future!

　　What you should do first is find out what make her addicted to computer games．Lack of love from parents? Poor scores? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her．Secondly, you should help her with his study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it．Thirdly, find anything else for her to do instead of the computer games．Your efforts will surely help to change her life．

Yours,

Jessica

短文改错

英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。

It was a long time since we last saw each other．You can hardly imagine how I miss you．How are you getting with your first job? I remember you once tell me you were eager to graduate and become an English teacher．Now you must have many first-hand experience．How do you find your English teaching? Is teaching kids English as interested as you expected in college? And do your student enjoy your classroom teaching? Anyway, I believe you must very popular with the kids, for you are a born teacher．Hope you great success in your work! Yes, why not give me call and come for a get-together in this weekend?

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favorite actor．I didn't have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get．Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and actor couldn't be seen everywhere．I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building．He was right there in the front of me! I couldn't believe my luck－not only did I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!

短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分,满分10分)

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually．At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help．I went up to see what was happening．I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything．Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly．I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety．To his great relief, the kid was saved．

　　I was proud what I had done．I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need．

短文改错：

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

删除：该行多一个词；把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei mountain in Sichuan．As everyone knows, it's famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals．The weather was fine．It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain．The three of them were very excited．As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories．On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful．The time passes quickly．Evening came down．We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain．The food was expensive and the service was good．I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow．

短文改错

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线(－)，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　A man was used to play the piano in a bar．He played very well that many people came to hear him play．But one night, the boss told him, “Some customers are tired of listen to the piano．If you want to get paid, sing a song! They are expecting you sing instead of playing．”

　　He had never sung songs in public before, so he had to sing a song．To his surprised, it turned out to be a success．Everyone moved by the song “Mona, Monalisa” he sang this time．Nobody had ever heard such beautiful a song before!

　　He might have lived the rest of her life as a common piano player in a bar, but for this time on, he went on to become one of the best-known singers．

短文改错

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面加上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

One day a little boy went to a garden followed his parents．They planted flowers and watered them as soon as possible．A few days after, they came there again．To their joy, the flowers they planted were growing so good．The father picked a flower and gave it to his wife to show her love, who was seen by his son．The following day the boy picked all the flowers to send it to his parents．Only at this moment the father realize what a bad effect he had for his son．So I think parents can be bad and good examples for their children, and they should set up good examples．