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One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike．He was badly hurt．Many people crowded around us．Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed．He has learned first aid．He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first．At that time the old man wasn't breathing．Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way．Within five minutes, the old man began to move little and doctors also arrived．They said that we had done was correct．I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference．

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

There's an old man in our village calling Old Joe who is said to be 110 years old．This can't be proved(证明)though he doesn't have a birth certificate(证明书)．All his personal papers destroyed during World War II．I don't know if he really is so old, and it doesn't matter．He certainly looks very much old．Of course, he is often asked question by people who want to be told the secret of long life．Old Joe always answered them like this, “If you are offered cigarette, never accept it; if you are annoyed by someone, never lose his temper(脾气); and if you are asked foolishly questions, never answer them．”

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My parents and I went to the park last Sunday．There were lots of visitors stand in front of the ticket window．We waited a long time and buy three tickets．In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was so eagerly to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd．Unfortunate，I got separated from my parents．I had hard time looking for them, and I had no luck．Wandering in the park，I felt alone without any companions．Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk to home, covering as much as 5 kilometer．

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及修改均限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分．

　　We have a party last Sunday．During the party, I made my way the bathroom and closed the door before me．A minute or two late, a little girl opened a bathroom door and walked in．I was still sit．“Don't you know if little girls aren't supposed to come into the bathroom when a little boy is using it?” I shouted．The little girl was shocked by my being at there．Then she started to cry．He quickly closed the door, ran to the kitchen, and tearfully complained to her parents and my grandmother．Most of the partygoer had overheard my loud remark and were greatly amused by it．

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第l1处起)不计分．

　　Today I visited the Smiths－my first visit to an America family．They live in an small town．It were very kind of them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home．The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home．They offered me with coffee and other drinks．We have a good time together．They wanted to know everything about China but asked lots of question．In fact, they are planning visit China next year．

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分

I went to Shanghai Expo on last week．At the gate I happend to meet some America tourusts．I greeted him in English and then we began to chat．I got to know that they wrer college students travel in China．They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes had taken place in the past few years．After which, we visited China Pavilion and had a good time．We exchanged our email address so that we could write each other in the future．They thanked me again and again．I was very glad to have a chance to practising my oral English

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从十一处起)不计分。

Fishing is my favorite sport．I often fished for hours without catching anything, and this doesn't worry me．Some fishermen are unlucky．Instead catching dish, they catch old boots and rubbish．I'm even less luck．I never catch everything－even old boots after having been spent a whole morning in the river．So I always go home with empty bag．“You should give up fishing,” my friends say, “It's a waste of time．” But they don't realize one important thing．I'm not real interested in fishing．I'm only interested in sitting in a boat and do nothing at all．