下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在错误处增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该增加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分；

3、如格式错误，则不得分。

Last winter vacation, some of my classmates decide to travel with their friends, while I chose to take part－time job to get experience and make some money．I learned from my teacher that a nearby company was looking after students with good handwriting to write addresses on envelope．The pay were 10 cents per envelope．I headed for the company, feeling sure that I would easy finish 300 envelopes in five hours and to make money．At fact, I only finished 200．Now, I fully understand what hard it is to make money．Getting out of the classroom is indeed necessary for we all．

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下面段文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Abby：

How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education．One hundred and twenty student took exams for it, but only a few were chosen and I was one of them．Therefore, my parents are not happy about it．They are strong against my going there．They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid that I will feel alone．They can’t imagine a girl so young live alone．They advised me to study in the capital instead．Then I’ll be able to continue living with them．How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?

Best wishes,

Jane

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文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改正后的词

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

June 12, Sunday

Today is Sunday．I didn't get up early as usually．On the morning after I finished my home－work, I do some washing．Then I telephoned one of my classmate and invited him to see a film．And unfortunately, when we got to the cinema at 3∶00pm, we found all the tickets had sold out．Then we went back to school and played the football．After this, when we were about to go to home, we saw our English teacher, Mr．Wang, coming into the school gate．He told us we had made great progress in English this term．He also suggested that we would read more and write more．We promised him that we would take her advice．

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We enjoyed staying with our grandparents, which allowed us to stay up．________

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The Changjiang River is longest river of all in China．________

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Much images of Ancient Egyptian gods show them with a human body．________

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He talked about the teachers and schools which he had visited．________

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They designed the buildings and built them as well as．________

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Visitors will not allowed to stay in the building after 9pm．________

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So the Amber Room become part of the Czar’s winter palace in 1716．________