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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Music is one of the arts．It is like the speaking language, but it uses sounds．Who invented music?

　　Who sing the first song? No one knows exactly the answers of these questions．But we know that music plays an important part almost everyone’s life．Baby and young children love to hear people singing to them．When they are a little old, they like to sing the songs they have heard．

　　When children go to the school, their world of music grows．In the middle grades students take music lessons．When they reach high school, we become interested in listening pop music．Music has meaning for everyone．It can make people happy but it can make them sad．

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties．The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese．My teacher advised me to keep diaries．I followed her advices．Happily it worked．Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English．One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher．She liked it very much that she read it to the class．Everyone said the story was the good one, I was great encouraged by their words．

短文改错

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不记分。

Ladies and Gentlemen：

　　Welcomed to the West Lake．First of all, let me make a brief introduction for it．

　　The West Lake like a shining pearl lying in the west of Hangzhou City．Surrounded by hill on the three sides, it is famous for it beautiful scenery, a plenty of historic sites and a variety of local products．Legend has it that the West Lake was a jewel falling from heaven when geologists insist this place had been a shallow sea gulf before it became that it is today．In any case, the West Lake inspired poets and painters for centuries．Enjoy your trip．Thank you!

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Dear Brown,

Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children．I have been told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit to it．How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river．It is so a beautiful place! We can hear birds singing happy all around．Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting．We usually work only five hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time visit the area and have a fun．I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience．If you have interests in it, reply to me soon．

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There are an increasing number of cars on the roads and a number rose by 20％last year．________

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Children who live in the country’s rural area are very probable to be poor．________

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What’s the public attitude to smoking in the place that you live? ________