增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号“∧”, 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线 (﹨) 划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注：1： 每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2：只允许修改10处，多者不计分（从11处起）
I was in hotel near the beach. It had been very windy for a few hours and it have rained for two days. Sudden, the wind became much stronger. There were some tree across the road near the beach and they begin to move from side to side. The hotel manager said what we had to stayed in the hotel because this was the start of a hurricane. We closed all the windows and stayed in their rooms. The hurricane lasted it for two days. It was terrified.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 

I can’t swim so I have a strong fear of water. Look back at my childhood, I think that three reasons might explain fear. Firstly, I am not allowed to go near the water when I was a child, as my mother had an unreasonable fear of it. Therefore, I was taught to see to the water as something danger. Secondly, my eyes became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the water, I couldn’t see something, and this increased my fear. What’s worse, for a child I once saw a neighbor drowned. Since then I have been more frightening.

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号“∧”, 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线 (﹨) 划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注：1： 每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2：只允许修改10处，多者不计分（从11处起）

I was in hotel near the beach. It had been very windy for a few hours and it have rained for two days. Sudden, the wind became much stronger. There were some tree across the road near the beach and they begin to move from side to side. The hotel manager said what we had to stayed in the hotel because this was the start of a hurricane. We closed all the windows and stayed in their rooms. The hurricane lasted it for two days. It was terrified.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一次。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Brown,

Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have been told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit to it .How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river .It is so a beautiful place! We can hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five hours a day ,so we will have plenty of spare time visit the area and have a fun . I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience . If you have interests in it, reply to me soon.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The burden of students have been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received few attention, especially from their own children.  

The picture shows us a touched moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day's work, the girl helps to remove the bag from his shoulder.

All this reminds me of my mother whom has been doing whatever she can to let me to have the best. But totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay attention to that my mother needs and always think studying well is only thing I can do in return. Now I know I can do my bit to help my mother with everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least preparing breakfast myself, so as to share her daily burden. The picture has convinced me that it is even much important to be a good daughter than a "good" student.