例如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can relax ourselves after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. So, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.

例如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

        2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Fred and I haven’t much in common. I sometimes wonder that why we are friends

at all. Fred is always busy make things. Everything he makes is such perfect that I

always admired him for his skills. My trouble is that I’m one of those lazy peoples.

Outside my work at the office, the only thing which interests me is listen to music.

I have a big collection of records and all day along the only thing I can think is when

I’m going to get to home to listen to a new piece.

 

例如： It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily                                       the I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 p.m. am in Friday evening. on

Today I’d like to tell you anything about riding a bike in London. If you visit London, you’ll

see many buses, cars or bikes. It’s very cheap and quick to use bike. If you take a bus, I often have to wait for an hour or so. Besides, the buses move very slowly. The underground is quickly but expensive and often crowded. I used to travel to work by bus. I was often late, and tiring. Then a friend suggested we went to work by bike. I followed him. Although we went slowly, but we always arrived on time. Taking a bus takes 50 minutes, while ride a bike only half an hour. Now I love riding to work and I feel more better.

 

 

例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I

                                         the

was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday.

am                                                               on

Dear Sir,

How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into

                    

a single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate

                                         

often held parties at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that

                              

disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position, I 

                             

am sure he will agree that the only solution for me is get a room of my own, one not in the same

building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me the

favor.

Best wishes.

　　                                                       Yours sincerely,
　                                                   　        Li Ming

 

例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I was                                               the                         am completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8pm in Friday evening.                                                             on

On Monday morning, I was on my way to school when suddenly as I saw a boy

      

knocked down by the car. In a hurry, I ran over and found the boy was serious hurt with much blood

on his face. Immediately, I call an ambulance and the boy was taken to the nearest hospital. For my

                                                    

relief, the boy was fine and would recover in a few day. I went away without giving his name. I

was late for class, and I felt happy for what I had done. As a proverb says, “ Help others is the

source of happiness.” I feel our duty to make the world a better place to live in.