假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）。并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

Dear James,

     I’d like to tell you anything about our sports meet. It was holding on

Oct.10^th , that was a fine day. There were over 2,000 students and teachers attend

 it. Yu Le, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finishes the race

 in 12.6 seconds and broke in the school record. The sports meet was really success.

 That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of

the winners，I was proud of that we had done.

     I am looking forward to receive your letter.

                                                                       Yours,

Dear Jim,

I'd like to tell you something more about our school　　  　　    　　　　　　 1.——

sports meet. It was held in Oct. 6, which was a fine　　　　　　  　　　　　　  　　 2.——

day. There were over 1, 000 students and teachers　　　　    　　　　    　　　　 3.——

attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the　　　　　　  　　 　　 4.——

100-meter race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds　　　　　　   　　　　　　  　　 5.——

and broke in the school record. The sports meet was　　　　　　 　　　　　　  　　 6.——

really success. That was because we were all trying　　　　  　　　　　　  　　　　 7.——

to do my best.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　    　　    　　 8.——

Although I was not one of the winner, I was　　　　　　　　 　　 　　　　 9.——

proud of that we had done.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　  10.——

Looking forward to receiving your letter.

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　   Yours,

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　   Li Ping

One day in my class，Maria shared her feelings about money，“Money worries me.I think I want to live without money because I hate it.I HATE MONEY.”We were all touched by Maria's words as they reminded us of the spiritual burdens that money managing can bring to us.After class I offered to help Maria deal with her financial problems.She hesitated to accept my offer，and I could see from the expression on her face that she was afraid of what it might involve.I quickly promised her that I wouldn't make her do more than she was able to.I told her frankly that I didn't enjoy managing my money any more than she did hers and wouldn't burden her with guilt，judgments，or impossible tasks.All I would ask her to do was to let me help her look at her fears and try to make some sense of them.

Maria still resisted my offer，and I can remember the excuses she gave me as they were the repeated complaints I had heard from so many people.“I'll never understand money，”she said.“My facts are meaningless.”“I don't deserve to have money.”“I never have enough.”“I have too little to manage.”“My financial position isn't worth looking at.”and the most devastating one of all，“I just can't do it.”

Going home that day，I couldn't get Maria out of my mind：her attitude conveyed the same negativity and  fear that I believed annoyed many people.I was sure it was this attitude that prevented people from managing their money effectively.My counseling(咨询)has taught me that these anxieties are inseparably connected to our self??doubts and fear for survival.Many of us are terrified of handling our money because we don't believe we can do it well，and to do it wrong would put our very existence at risk.

On a deeper level we know that money is not the source of life，but sense of worth drives us to act as if it were.It locks us up in self??doubts and prevents us from tapping into the true source of our management power，our spirit.

The underlined word“devastating”in Paragraph 2 probably means ________.

A．convincing     B．interesting     C．shocking       D．valuable

Maria's words moved the author and others because they were ________.

A．in the same financial trouble          B．in the same financial condition

C．of the same family background      D．of the same feeling over the issue

As for money managing，the author intended to tell Maria how to ________.

A．overcome her fears                B．make wise decisions

C．avoid making mistakes           D．learn the necessary skills

Maria wouldn't take the author's offer of help for fear of________.

A．being forced to share her money with others

B．having to do something beyond her reach

C．being found guilty of making impossible errors

D．showing her judgment about money

According to the author，people's anxieties about managing money result from their understanding of money as the only source of ________.

A．life        B．values   C．spirit                    D．power

短文改错（共8小题；每小题0.5分, 满分4分）

下面短文中有8处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）, 并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并往该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改8处, 多者（从第9处起）不计分

Dear Jim,

I'd like to tell you something about our school sports meeting. It was held on Oct.6, when was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds and broke in the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do our best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.

Looking forward to receive your letter.