假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Ladies and gentlemen,

May I have your attentions, please? In Saturday, July 27th, there will have a few visits to different places. Everyone was welcome. All the visitors will be divided into four groups. Each group of visitors can visit one of the place – a factory, a farm, a school and a hospital. Please you sign your name at the Service Desk before 9: 00 a.m. and say what place you wish to visit. We’ll set out after the breakfast at 8 and we will return in the afternoon. We will have lunch at place of visit.

We wish you a pleasant journey. That’ s all.

Thank you.

So you have been called for an interview---well done?Your effort has been paid off? You will feeI better at the interview if you show an understanding of the nature of the organization．

Ask someone who already does it，or check it with one of the advisers．

Ask a member of your family or a friend to act as the employer and to give you an unreal interview．Be as realistic as possible，answer the questions seriously．Afterwards discuss how it went．Think about how the employer would prefer to see your look．Remember---the majority of employers are over 30.

It is not wise to rush out and buy new clothes.which will be worn for the first time at the interview．You’ll feel more at ease in a familiar dress．

Carelessness in any of these could cost you the job．Arrive at least 15 minutes before time，this will give you a chance to have a look around，read the notice board and get the feel of the place．Being late at the interview produces a bad impression．The first impression that the interviewer gets of you is formed as you walk through the door，so take a couple of deep breaths．

Be ready to shake hands if the interviewer offers．

Don’t take a seat until asked．Then sit comfortably．

Make eye contact  when you are greeted and again if you shake hands．And during questioning,eye contact is a form of non-verbal greeting．

Remember the interviewer’s name and use it from time to time．

Be ready for the question “Is there anything you want to ask?” Before the interview you should get ready for two or three such questions．Look on these not just as a chance to get information but as a means to give your employer a better impression．Asking can show knowledge but avoid asking about holidays，pensions(养老金)and so on．It looks as if you are tired even before you begin．You can check on these later，when the hope for job is offered．

And if you fail, look upon the interview as an experience in itself．Learn from it．We wish you good luck and good job hunting．

1.Before you go to see the employer，you’d better      .

2.What does the phrase“eye contact”means?

3.People usually do the following things before a job interview．Which is the right order for doing them?

a．Asking a friend to give you an unreal interview．

b．Understanding the nature of the organization．

c．Paying attention to your clothes．

d．Arriving at the place of the interview ahead of time．

e．Getting some information from the advisers．

4.Why do you prepare yourself for some Is--there·-anything·-you·-want--to-say questions?

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Ladies and gentlemen,
May I have your attentions, please? In Saturday, July 27th, there will have a few visits to different places. Everyone was welcome. All the visitors will be divided into four groups. Each group of visitors can visit one of the place – a factory, a farm, a school and a hospital. Please you sign your name at the Service Desk before 9: 00 a.m. and say what place you wish to visit. We’ll set out after the breakfast at 8 and we will return in the afternoon. We will have lunch at place of visit.
We wish you a pleasant journey. That’ s all.
Thank you.

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So you have been called for an interview-well done ? Your effort has been paid off . Now to get the job , you will fell better at the interview if you show an understanding of the nature of the organization .
Ask a member of family or a friend to act as the employer and to give you an unreal interview . Be as realistic as possible , answer the questions seriously . Afterwards discuss how it went .
Think about how the employer would prefer to see you look . Remember the majority of employers are over 30 .
It is not wise to rush out and buy new clothes which will be worn for the first time at the interview . You’ll feel more at ease (自在) in a familiar dress .
Carelessness in any of these could cost you the job . Arrive at least 15 minutes before time . This will give you a chance to have a look around , read the notice broad and get the feel of the place .
Being late at interviews produces a bad impression. The first impression the interviewer gets of you formed as you walk through the door , so take a couple of deep breaths .
Be ready to shake hands of the interviewer offers .
Don’t take a seat until asked . Then sit comfortably .
Make eye contact when you are greeted and again if you shake hands , and during questioning . Eye contact is a form of non-verbal(非语言的) greeting .
Remember the interviewer’s name and use it from time to time .
Be ready for the question “Is there anything you want to ask?” Before the interview you should get ready for two or three such questions. Look on these not just as a chance to get information but as a means to improve your prospects (前途)in the employer’s estimation(判断). 
Asking can show knowledge and avoid mistakes even before you begin . You can check on these later , when the hope for job is offered . 
And if you fail , look upon the interview as an experience in itself , learn from it .
We wish you good luck and good job hunting .
72．Before you go to see the employer , it is better for you to_____________ .
A．put on your newly-bought clothes
B．have you hair cut
C．buy some modern and beautiful ties , shoes . etc
D．find a dress which you’ve got used to
73．To make a good impression , it is important for yo_____________ .
A．to walk through the door quickly
B．not to see the interviewer’s eyes
C．to sit down in front of the interviewer
D．to remember the interviewer’s name and use it sometimes
74．The underlined word “eye contact” means_____________.
A．looking at each other for a long time
B．a kind of greeting without any words
C．shaking hands with the employer again and again
D．a way of getting a wonderful job
75．People usually do the following things before a job interview, which is the right order for doing them ?
a. Asking a friend to give you an unreal interview .
b. Understanding the nature of the organization .
c. Paying attention to your clothes .
d. Arriving at the place of the interview on time .
e. Getting some information from the advisers .
A．a, e, b, c, d     B．d, c, b, a , e     C．b, e, a , c, d     D．e, d, a , b, c

So you have been called for an interview－well done. Your effort has paid off. Now go to get the job. You will feel better at the interview if you show an understanding of the nature of the organization.

Ask someone who already does it or check it out with one of the advisers.

Ask a member of family or a friend to act as the employer and to give you a practice interview. Afterwards discuss how it went.

Think about how the employer would prefer to see your look. Remember most of the employers are over 30. It is not wise to buy new clothes that will be worn for the first time at the interview. It’s best to wear a familiar dress.

Carelessness in any of these could cost you the job. Arrive at least 15 minutes ahead of time. This will give you a chance to have a look around，read the notice board and get the feel of the place. Being late at interviews produces a bad impression. The first impression the interviewer gets of you is formed as you walk through the door，so take a couple of deep breaths.

Be ready to shake hands if the interviewer offers.

Don’t take a seat until asked. Then sit comfortably.

Remember the interviewer’s name and use it from time to time.

Be ready for the question “Is there anything you want to ask？” Before the interview you should get ready for two or three such questions. Look on these not just as a chance to get information but as a means to leave a better impression. Asking can show knowledge and avoid asking about holidays， pension (养老金) and so on. You can check on these later when the hoped??for job is offered.

And if you fail，look upon the interview as an experience in itself. Learn from it.

We wish you good luck and good job hunting.

To make a good impression on the interviewer, it is important for you __________.

A. to walk through the door quickly

B. to be a little late for the interview

C. to wear your new clothes for the first time

D. to remember the interviewer’s name and use it sometimes

Which of the following can you do during a job interview？

A. Remain quiet to show your calmness.

B. Discuss the pay，holidays and such things with the interviewer.

C. Ask the interviewer some personal questions such as age, marriage.

D. Be brave enough to say something about your advantage in choosing the job.

In which order do people usually do these steps before a job interview？

a. Asking a friend to give you a practice interview.

b. Understanding the nature of the organization.

c. Paying attention to your clothes.

d. Arriving at the place of the interview ahead of time.

e. Getting some information from the advisers.

A. a， e， b， c， d       B. d， c， b， a， e

C. b， e， a， c， d       D. b， d， a， c， e

The underlined sentence “Carelessness in any of these could cost you the job” means ________.

A. if you are careless，you’re sure to pay some money for the interview

B. carelessness might lead to your failure in the interview

C. to be successful in job hunting，you should pay for it

D. it sometimes needs carelessness to make you feel comfortable