增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
One day while David was walking, he saw an old man struggled in the river. Quick he ran over and pulled the old man out. After he came back in life, the old man told to David he could give anything. David wanted because he was rich. David laughed. He doesn't believe the old man was rich. But he didn't want anything. Then he thought of something. "I want my dad to have job", he said. "Right." said the old man. "What's her telephone number?"
When David got home his dad said that he got a phone call just now and that one of the biggest corporation in the USA has offered him a job.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag Form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel with any luggage. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

One day while David was walking, he saw an old man struggled in the river. Quick he ran over and pulled the old man out. After he came back in life, the old man told to David he could give anything. David wanted because he was rich. David laughed. He doesn't believe the old man was rich. But he didn't want anything. Then he thought of something. "I want my dad to have job", he said. "Right." said the old man. "What's her telephone number?"

When David got home his dad said that he got a phone call just now and that one of the biggest corporation in the USA has offered him a job.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一次。

      2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I could even communicate some college students freely.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T－shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister was about get out of the shop as quickly as she could while a shop assistant came over to us. It was turned out to be her own cup, that she'd left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, but I just thought it was funny!