短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)

英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下便条为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

As students, we have classes for early morning till late afternoon．Therefore, take a ten-minute break between class is definitely important, even necessary. Otherwise we may feel both physically or mentally tired. During the ten-minute break we did something to get rid of tiredness．What we need is to have real rest, instead of getting even tired．So don't do anything that will make you too excited．My ten-minute break is always pleased．I usually take some exercise．Sometime I have a free chat with my classmates．When the new class begins, I feel freshly again.

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150左右的英语短文。

Insistence or Giving up

There is a battle in our daily life. Two forces are fighting with each other again and again. They never stop until you are buried in the earth. We called them insistence and giving up. They are like twins. One is angle, and the other is a demon..

As we all know, we want to pass the CET-4. So we get our own strategy. First of all, I am bound to master five thousand vocabularies. Second, I will write an article every week which is at least two hundred words. Then I will read at least two English articles, make more friends with foreigners for learning native English, and listening to some English news broadcast every day.

Nevertheless, according to my strategy, the first day, I should wake up at 6 a.m. to memorize at least twenty words. The alarm clock rings for me; I should get rid of my bed in order to study. Suddenly, “Giving up” came and whispered to me. “What about a five-minute prolong sleeping? How soft, comfortable this bed is! But Ms Insistence urged me, “Don’t listen to him; Come on, let’s carry out our plan.” Her voice is sweet, but not what I need.

Time flies! If we can’t seize every opportunity to appreciate time, Mr. Giving up will win all the time. Insistence of your plan, your dream may not be accomplished successfully, but giving up, you are sure to fail in life. (237w)

【写作内容】

有些人做事有时候缺乏持之以恒的毅力。请就“坚持” 还是 “放弃”的话题发表你自己的看法，内容要点包括：

1 以约30个词概括阅读材料的要点；

2 请选择一个角度，用你自己或朋友的经历，以约120个词谈谈自己的观点，内容包括：

1）持之以恒对工作和学习有什么意义；

2）以成功或失败的事例来说明持之以恒的重要性；

3）你对大家的建议是什么。

【写作要求】

在作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Why is it that we tend to value relationships more once they've ended? Is it simply human nature to take for granted the smile of someone close，the friendship of a relative，the concern of a neighbor? In the moment，we think that these people will be around forever.

Most of us never stop to imagine all those who have a profound impact on our lives. It’s so easy to justify this casual attitude by saying we are too busy, too tired，too involved with work，too concerned about money，and the list of excuses goes on and on. So enjoying a friendship may be put off for one day, and then another. Before long, feelings have faded，and there is less incentive to get together. Almost relegated to a chore now，precious moments become something to endure.  

Usually, something dramatic must happen to change this apathy and pull one out of a rut. Perhaps it’s something shocking，like a death，a divorce，sudden illness，an accident — something stunning to force taking notice．Then comes the guilt，the re-assessment of feelings，the sadness of loss.

We long to have those precious moments once again，to share and express our feelings. Instead of waiting for an excuse，why not get out of the rut，take the initiative，and spend quality time with the people you value. Let them know how really important they are.

[写作内容]

1、以约30个词概括短文的要点；

２、以约120个词就“珍惜同学或朋友之间的友谊”这个主题发表你的看法，并包括

以下要点：

(1)你成长中因为没有珍惜友谊而感到后悔的经历；

(2)造成这样经历的原因；

(3)你对成长中这次经历的看法及建议。

［写作要求］

１、作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容,

但不得直接引用原文中的句子；  ２、标题自定。

[评分标准]    概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯

此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

Time seem limited for us Senior Three students.              76_________

Therefore, more and more student are studying from early                77_________

 morning till lately afternoon, even during the ten-minute         78_________

 break. In my opinion, Take a break between classes is                     79_________

 not necessary. Otherwise, we will feel tired both physically        80_________

 and mentally. During the break, we should do something          81_________

to get rid of tiredness. What they need is to have a real rest,               82_________

instead getting more tired. My break is always pleasing.                   83_________

Sometimes I take some simple exercise. Sometimes I had a free    84_________

chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. While the              85_________

next class begins, I feel fresh again.

第二卷（共35分）

第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）

第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

I went to see a film with my brother after supper.

On our way to the cinema, we meet an American girl named   76. ________

Alice, she had got lost and looked very anxious. We went      77. ________

up to see that was the matter. We then took her to the hotel.    78. ________

While going there we told her the great changes that had      79. ________

been taken place in our country in the past few years and      80. ________

Alice told us a lot about the youth in American.              81. ________

Although we missed the film, but we felt very happy,        82. ________

for we not only helped Alice get out of troubles but also      83. ________

knew something about United States. We saw that English      84. ________

can strength understanding and friendship.                  85. ________