误点点拨:①处them改为which, 此处为非限制性定语从句. ②处去掉turned.turn off为短暂性动词短语.在此处不合句意. ③处将thinking改为thought,此处应为被动语态. ④处去掉it.此处as引导非限制性定语从句. [范文] Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. He was once thought to be a boy who was not worth educating. In fact, he was a man full of imagination. I admire Edison a lot because of his great contribution to the world. He had more than 1000 inventions. In his little time, he was always eager to know how things worked, which helped him to earn the nickname “the Wizard of Meio Park . He was also so diligent that he worked day and night. And this explained why he had so many inventions. What impresses me most is his famous saying, “genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration . Probably I cannot be an Edison myself, but I can be a hardworking learner. From him, I realize the secret to success is not when and where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life. [即学即练] 【查看更多】
