误点点拨:①处改为:will be reduced from-,此处应该为被动语态. ②处改为Just as the saying goes, good health is over wealth.此处使用的仅仅是一个分句.故改为定语从句. [范文]: Teachers and fellow students, May I have your attention, please? It’s now 6 o’clock in the evening. Here is the weather report. There will be a strong wind from this midnight to two early tomorrow morning and the temperature will drop by 5℃ to 8℃. Also it’s going to be cloudy or there may be light snowfalls tomorrow morning. Therefore, make sure that all the windows and doors are closed when you leave the classroom tonight in case they might be broken by the strong wind. You see, it’s getting colder and colder, so I’d like to remind you that you should put on more clothes when getting up the following morning to protect yourself from cold. After all, good health is of vital importance to anyone. That’s all. Thank you a lot. Here’s Li Hua reporting. [即学即练] 【查看更多】
