写作（共两节，满分 35 分）

 请你对下文内容进行修改。文章中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的词

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分

When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice so put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and reading it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.

第一节：短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)

英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch them, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came back into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ran out of my room to find out what had happened: a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom.  

写作（共两节，满分 35 分）
【小题1】请你对下文内容进行修改。文章中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的词
注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分
When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice so put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and reading it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.

第Ⅱ卷(非选择题，共50分)

第四部分：写作(共两节，满分50分)

第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每小题1．5分，满分15分)

    英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

  增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

  删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

  修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

  注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

           2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

           3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。

  Dear classmates，

    I’ll tell you everything about my future．Every one of US is thinking about the future．Do you know what that mine is? I have decided to become the middle school teacher．Does it sound surprising? I have this dream when I was only a child．I love children．

      As we all can see，teachers are great needed in our country，especially in the country side．Many parents want his children to be well—educated，and they don’t want them to be teachers．Perhaps one of the main reason is that teachers work too hard but get too little．In spite that，I am determined to devote all my life to teach in my hometown．