短文改错

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词．

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分

Dear Tom,

　　It i s great to receive your email．Now I'd like tell you something which took place in my school ye sterday．In the afternoon we hold a grown-up ceremony for our coming 18 year s old birthday．At fir st we made an oath that a s grown-up, we should have a sen se of duty for our social from now on．Then we showed our thank s for our parent s who had gone through hard ship s to bring u s up and teacher s who have been educating u s patient．And our teacher s al so gave u s card s expre s sed their good wi she s to u s．Finally, we put on wonderful performance s, singing or dancing．We learned a lot from the activity．I think it' s very important for u s．I will remember a day in my life．

短文改错，假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Tom,

　　It is great to receive your email．Now I'd like tell you something which took place in my school yesterday．In the afternoon we hold a grown－up ceremony for our coming 18 years old birthday．At first we made an oath that as grown－up we should have a sense of duty for our social from now on．Then we showed our thanks for to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patient．And our teachers also gave us cards expressed their good wishes to us．Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing or dancing．We learned a lot from the activity．I think it's very important for us．I will never remember the day in my life．

Yours,

Li Hua