假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。短文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Cathy,
I’m writing to share my opinion on fashion with you, for I had just heard that you are disappointing because you can’t afford famous brands.
I shall say that it is naturally for people to care about his appearance. And it is true that fashionable thing like clothes and shoes will make one more eye-catching. Therefore, I think it is really a waste of money to buy famous brands. Besides, it will also add the burden of your parents.
What’s more, beauty is just skin deep. There are many things in which can make you popular beside fashion. A great amount of knowledge and a warm heart will surely win other’s respect.
As the saying goes, never judge the person by appearance. I do hope that you will remember the saying and be as happy as you used to be.
Yours,
Jane

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。短文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Cathy,

I’m writing to share my opinion on fashion with you, for I had just heard that you are disappointing because you can’t afford famous brands.

I shall say that it is naturally for people to care about his appearance. And it is true that fashionable thing like clothes and shoes will make one more eye-catching. Therefore, I think it is really a waste of money to buy famous brands. Besides, it will also add the burden of your parents.

What’s more, beauty is just skin deep. There are many things in which can make you popular beside fashion. A great amount of knowledge and a warm heart will surely win other’s respect.

As the saying goes, never judge the person by appearance. I do hope that you will remember the saying and be as happy as you used to be.

Yours,

Jane

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

   增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写上该加的词。

   删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

   修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

   注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Time is valuable but limit．There’s a famous saying, “Time is life”, this shows the importance of time．When time had gone, it will never return．It is a pity when many people make poor use of time．They spend their precious time oversleeping, drinking and hanging around. They don’t realize wasting time is equal with wasting part of their life．They always regret having made little achievement so far．However, we should form the habit of value time．Do not put off what can be done today tomorrow．Laziness will not only bring us the failure, but lead us to the road to poverty and even deaths．

假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

   增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写上该加的词。

   删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

   修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

   注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

          2．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Time is valuable but limit．There’s a famous saying, “Time is life”, this shows the importance of time．When time had gone, it will never return．It is a pity when many people make poor use of time．They spend their precious time oversleeping, drinking and hanging around. They don’t realize wasting time is equal with wasting part of their life．They always regret having made little achievement so far．However, we should form the habit of value time．Do not put off what can be done today tomorrow．Laziness will not only bring us the failure, but lead us to the road to poverty and even deaths．