需要说明的是.英语的开头和结尾是最关键的.尤其是开头.基本上.不跑题.遵守题目要求.一个漂亮的开头.一个还过得去的结尾.2-3个高级词汇.1-2个漂亮的句子.加上整齐的字迹.作文的分就不会低了哦.所以.精心为你的作文想个漂亮的开头吧.切记哦:) 高考英语作文增分的“亮点 文章的连贯性和紧凑感是高考书面表达的一个重要评分标准.满分作文有个共性.就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分.为此.学会使用关联词.是提升书面表达质量的重要策略之一. 有的同学在作文中使用过多简单句.成了简单句堆砌,有的写复杂句时.动辄用so. and.then.but.or.however.yet等非但达不到丰富表达方式的目的.反而使句子结构松散.呆板.为了避免这种现象.可以通过使用不同的关联词.不仅能够丰富句型.而且还能够把思想表达得更清楚.意义更连贯. ■ 金题解析 当前不少文学作品被改编成电影.有人选择看电影.有人则喜欢读原著.请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer? 为题.按照下列要点写一篇英语短文: 看电影:省时.有趣.易懂 2. 读原著:细节更多.语言优美 3. 我的看法及理由 [注意] 1. 词数:100~120 文章题目和开头已给出. 2. 参考词汇: original work 或 book in the original Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. [写作指导] 这是一篇提纲式半开放性作文.写作时.我们既要注意汉语提示的要点.又要准确表达自己的观点.因此.要分两段写出两种不同的观点.在最后一段写出自己的观点.高考书面表达新评分标准在语言运用上对同学们提出了更高的要求.即在考查短文语言表达准确性的基础上.进一步强调用词的得体性.表达方式的多样性及语言的连贯性.因此.在写作时.我们一定要尽可能多使用高级词汇和复杂句型.要恰当使用连接词.过渡词.这样的文章才能出采.才能得高分. [参考范文] Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow. Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful. Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what’s more, I am able to better understand the author’s ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it. [精彩点击] 写作要求我们就选择看电影还是读原著谈谈看法.作者在做到了要点齐全.内容充实.语言规范.语法正确的同时.较好地运用句子间的连接词.从而使文章结构严谨.层次分明.逻辑性强. ①第一段中.besides一词的使用.多角度说明人们选择看电影的理由, ②第二段中.meanwhile一词的使用.增强了语言表达的说服力, ③第三段中.what’s more一词的使用.使作者在说明自己观点时呈现较强的逻辑性和感染力.In a word用于总结前文.突出了主题. ■ 关联词的应用 文章段落之间的逻辑关系可以用启.承.转.合来概括.“启 就是开头, “承 是承接.“转 是转折.“合 是综合或总结. (1)用于“启 的关联词语通常用在段落或文章的开头: first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to begin with, to start with, recently, now, nowadays, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, lately, currently等.例: ①Nowadays.a heated debate about private cars is under way in China. 时下.人们正议论着关于私家车的话题. ②In the recent few years, millions of fast food restaurants have mushroomed all over China. 近几年.中国涌现上百万快餐店. ③Currently. there is a widespread concern over increasing traffic accidents. 时下.不断增加的交通事故已引起人们的广泛关注. ④First of all. doing exercise every day is of the utmost importance in keeping fit. 首先.每日锻炼对保持健康至关重要. ⑤Generally speaking. the more you practice. the more skillfully you can write in English. 一般来说.多实践.英语的写作能力就越强. (2)用于“承 的关联词语通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中: second, similarly, in addition, besides, then, furthermore, moreover, what is more, what is worse, for example, for instance, certainly, surely, obviously, in other words, especially, particularly, in particular, indeed, still, third, truly, in fact, at the same time, no doubt等.例: ①The answer to this problem involves many factors. First, . . . Next, . . . Last, . . . 解决问题的方法涉及两方面.首先.--其次.--最后.-- ②The following factors account for the problem. On the one hand, . . . On the other hand, . . . 以下原因导致了这一问题. 一方面. --另一方面.-- ③As a matter of fact, it is health rather than wealth that counts. 事实上.健康才是最重要. ④What is more serious is that we do not cherish the wildlife. 更严重的是.我们不珍惜野生动物. ⑤In addition, we should not neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society. 此外.我们不应忽视每个人都想要一个温馨祥和的社会. (3)用于“转 的关联词语通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中: but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, in contrast, in any case, at any rate, nevertheless, otherwise, or, or else, while, whereas, but, despite, in spite of ..., yet, instead等.例: ①However, this idea is now being questioned by more and more experts. 这一想法却受到越来越多的专家质疑. ②But just as a coin has two sides, tourism inevitably has its disadvantages. 凡事都有两方面.旅游不可避免地有其缺陷. ③Parents complain their children are behaving unreasonably while the children declare their parents to be old-fashioned. 父母抱怨孩子行为不端.孩子则认为父母太落伍. ④In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completed realized. 尽管有些变化.妇女解放仍未完全实现. ⑤On the other hand, some examinations fail to measure how the students have really studied. 相反.有些考试却难以真正衡量学生学识. (4)用于“合 的关联词语通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中:in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking.to sum up, finally, in conclusion, at last, in summary, therefore, as a result, above all, thus.after all, eventually, hence, in sum, on the whole, to sum up等.例: ①Last but no least, the shortcoming in education is the cause contributing to juvenile delinquency. 最后.但并非最不重要.教育上的缺失是助长青少年犯罪的原因. ②For these reasons, we can conclude that receiving college education is wise. 基于这些原因.我们可以得出结论:接受大学教育是明智的. ③Therefore.it takes longer time and more energy to communicate in written English than in oral English. 因此.书面语交流比口语需要更多时间和精力. ④In short. environmental pollution is the major problem to be solved to make our world a better place in which to live. 总之.要想生活安逸.必须解决环境污染问题. ⑤From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society. 通过以上讨论.我们可以得出结论:自行车的优点远大于缺点.并且在现代社会它仍将发挥重要作用. 高考英语作文精彩短语150条 1 欣赏大自然的风景 to appreciate the scenery of nature 2 培养公德心 to cultivate the public mindedness 3 维护健康 to maintain health 4 保护环境 to protect the environment 5 开拓视野 to broaden the horizon 6 开拓心胸 to broaden the mind 7 调剂生活 to make life pleasant 8 松散身心 to relax oneself 9 启迪心灵 to enlighten the mind 10 灌输知识 to impart knowledge into someone 11 追求理想 to seek after the ideal 12 实现抱负 to realize one's ambition 13 守信用 to keep one's promise 14 跟上时代 to keep up with the times 15 欣赏古典文学 to appreciate the classical literature 16 学习吉他 to learn guitar 17 陶冶品德 to cultivate the character 18 贡献国家 to contribute oneself to the country 19 锻炼身体 to strengthen, exercise the body 20 缺乏休闲活动 to lack recreations 21 作笔记 to take notes 22 使用参考书 to use reference books 23 关心社会 to be concerned about the society 24 服从校规 to follow the rules of the school 25 尽身为学生的责任 to fulfill one's duty as a student 26 克服困难 to overcome the difficulty 27 面临困难 to be confronted with the difficulty 28 渡过困境 to weather the storm 29 走快捷方式 to cut the corner 30 量脉搏 to feel the pulse 31 开药方 to prescribe the medicine 32 坚守原则 to stick to the principle 33 注意卫生 to emphasize the importance of hygiene 34 乱丢垃圾 to litter; to scatter garbage 35 美化环境 to beautify the environment 36 种植树木 to grow trees 37 防止污染 to prevent the pollution 38 提升生活质量 to promote the qualities of life 39 造成损害 to do damage to 40 对...有益 to benefit; to be beneficial to 41 对...有害 to be harmful to; to do harm to 42 任意停车 to park the car at random 43 制造噪音 to make noises 44 占用人行道 to occupy the sidewalk 45 妨碍交通 to hinder the traffic 46 排放污烟.废气 to belch smoke, exhaust, fume 47 造成不便 to cause inconvenience 48 造成混乱 to bring about the disorder 49 闯红灯 to run through the red light 50 利用天桥 to make use of the overpass 51 查字典 to consult the dictionary 52 屏息 to hold one's breath 53 流泪 to shed tears 54 符合需要 to meet the demand 55 生根 to take root 56 产生结果 to bear fruit 57 打破沉默 to break the ice 58 气馁 to lose heart; to get discouraged 59 振作 to pull oneself together; to take heart 60 采取步骤 to take steps; to take measures 61 缓和悲伤 to ease the sorrow 62 承受负担 to bear the responsibility 63 考虑到 to make allowance for 64 把握机会 to seize the opportunity 65 跑腿 to run an errand 66 树立楷模 to set a good example 67 接受教育 to receive education 68 提升生活的水平 to raise the standard of living 69 告辞 to take one's leave 70 有很深的了解 to have a deep understanding of 71 跟随流行 to follow the fashion 72 提钱 to withdraw money 73 存钱 to deposit money 74 良心不安 the conscience stirs 75 自立 to be independent; to stand on one's own 76 英文很好 to have a good command of English 77 有广泛的知识 to have a wide range of knowledge 78 喜爱艺术 to have a great liking for arts 79 扮演重要角色 to play an important role in 80 聊天 to have a chat with 81 有...才能 to have a talent for 82 选择 to make a choice 83 有很大的影响 to have a great influence on 84 予人...很深的印象 to make a deep impression on 85 愚弄 to make a fool of 86 找借口 to make an excuse 87 给人搭便车 to give one a lift 88 打电话 to give someone a ring 89 冒险 to take chances 90 怀恨 to bear grudge against someone 91 牢记在心 to bear .....in mind 92 板着脸 to pull a long face 93 对...充耳不闻 to turn a deaf ear to 94 被开除 to be dismissed from school 95 生气 to be angry with 96 负担责任 to assume the responsibility 97 符合需要 to serve the purpose 98 变胖 to gain weight 99 有道理 to make sense 100 记日记 to keep a diary 101 尽己所能 to do what one can 102 擅长网球 to be at home in tennis 103 郊游 to go on an outing 104 消磨时间 to kill time 105 增加生活的情趣 to increase the pleasures of life 106 精神抖擞 to be refreshed 107 解除紧张和焦虑 to relieve the tension and anxiety 108 宣泄久积的情绪 to release the pent-up feelings 109 游手好闲 to fool around 110 准备考试 to prepare for the examination 111 参加课外活动 to take part in the club activities 112 无精打采的 to be listless 113 精力充沛的 to be vigorous, energetic 114 防台 to guard against the typhoon 115 逃避现实 to escape the reality 116 达到目标 to achieve the aim 117 五育并重 to lay equal emphasis on the Five Disciplines 118 感到无聊 to feel bored 119 感到剌激 to be excited 120 感到满意 to be pleased, satisfied 121 感到失望 to be disappointed 122 感到振奋 to be encouraged, inspired 123 感到气馁 to be discouraged, frustrated 124 感到疲倦的 to be exhausted 125 感到烦恼 to be worried, upset, disturbed, bothered 126 放弃理想 to abandon the ideal 127 奠定基础 to lay the foundation 128 失去耐心 to lose patience 129 进步 to make progress 130 失去连络 to lose track of 131 保持连络 to keep in touch with 132 误入歧途 to go astray 133 养成...的习惯 to make it a rule to; to cultivate the habit 134 统一中国 to reunify China 135 不辞辛劳 to take the pains to 136 遇到交通阻塞 to be caught in a traffic jam 137 给...教训 to teach someone a lesson 138 改过自新 to turn over a new leaf 139 引以为乐 to take delight in 140 予...以打击 to deal a heavy blow to 141 予...以威胁 to pose a threat to 142 取代 to take the place of 143 预作保留 to make the reservation 144 使...澈夜未眠 to cost someone a sleepless night 145 充满喜悦 to be filled with joy 146 背诵 to learn....by heart 147 鼓励 to encourage, inspire 148 产生不同 to make a great difference 149 犯法 to violate the law 150 不遗余力 to spare no efforts to 查看更多

 

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请根据以下的任务说明和写作要求,写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

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这是即将衰老的父亲写给儿子的一封信。父亲在信中请求儿子在自己老了的时候多多关照自己。请阅读下面这篇文章后,按照要求完成如下任务:

Dear son,

The day that you see me old and I am already not, have patience and try to understand me…If I get dirty when eating…if I cannot dress…have patience.Remember the hours I spent teaching it to you.If, when I speak to you, I repeat the same things thousand and one times…do not interrupt me…listen to me.When you were small, I had to read to you thousand and one times the same story until you get to sleep…When I do not want to have a shower, neither shame me nor scold me…

Remember when I had to chase you with thousand excuses I invented, in order that you wanted to bath…When you see my ignorance on new technologies…give me the necessary time and not look at me with your laughing at me…I taught you how to do so many things…to eat good, to dress well…to solute life…When at some moment I lose the memory or the thread of our conversation…let me have the necessary time to remember…and if I cannot do it, do not become nervous…as the most important thing is not my conversation but surely to be with you and to have you listening to me…

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请简明扼要地复述这封书信的基本内容,该部分需要写大约60词;根据这封书信的主旨大意,假设有一天你老了的时候,你有什么建议需要给你的孩子交代呢?至少包含以下的内容要点,该部分的词数需要大约90词。

1.如果我患的是不治之症,就别浪费钱财了;

2.教育孩子要活到老学到老;

3.当我年老患病的时候,给自己的孩子提一些合理化要求。

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假如你是太原某所中学的学生李华。暑假将至,你校外籍教师Mr. Smith打算利用暑假外出旅游,请你根据图片和中文提示用英语写一封信,为Mr. Smith提供旅游建议。
1.需要说明旅游线路。
2.告知旅行日程安排、就餐及住宿等情况
注意:1.短文必须包括所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2.词数:100-120之间; 
3.信的开头已给出,不计入总词数。                 

太原

 
                                                       

Mr. Smith,
Here is my suggestion about your journey during the Summer holiday...
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Yours  Sincerely
Lihua

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假如你是太原某所中学的学生李华。暑假将至,你校外籍教师Mr. Smith打算利用暑假外出旅游,请你根据图片和中文提示用英语写一封信,为Mr. Smith提供旅游建议。

1.需要说明旅游线路。

2.告知旅行日程安排、就餐及住宿等情况

注意:1.短文必须包括所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

        2.词数:100-120之间; 

 3.信的开头已给出,不计入总词数。                 

太原

 
                                                       

Mr. Smith,

Here is my suggestion about your journey during the Summer holiday...

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

 

Yours  Sincerely

   Lihua

 

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书面表达。
     假如你是太原某所中学的学生李华。暑假将至,你校外籍教师Mr. Smith打算利用暑假外出旅游,
请你根据图片和中文提示用英语写一封信,为Mr. Smith提供旅游建议。
     1. 需要说明旅游线路。
     2. 告知旅行日程安排、就餐及住宿等情况
     注意:
     1. 短文必须包括所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
     2. 词数:100-120之间;
     3. 信的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
                                               
Mr. Smith,
     Here is my suggestion about your journey during the Summer holiday _________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
                                                                                                                              Yours Sincerely,
                                                                                                                               Li Hua

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书面表达。
     假如你是太原某所中学的学生李华。暑假将至,你校外籍教师Mr. Smith 打算利用暑假外出旅游,请你根据图片和中文提示用英语写一封信,为Mr. Smith 提供旅游建议。
1. 需要说明旅游线路。
2. 告知旅行日程安排、就餐及住宿等情况
注意:
        1.  短文必须包括所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
        2.  词数:100-120 之间;  
        3. 信的开头已给出,不计入总词数。                  
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