[范文点评] 1)文中恰当地运用了转折.并列的连词.副词.上下衔接自然.如:what’s more,last but not least; however; what’s worse- 2)多种句型表达方式.同位语从句,原因状语从句,形式主语句式等- 如:-hold the opinion that-; it is convenient for people to -. 3)文章观点主题句与论据分类清晰.层次分明.如:Many people hold the opinion that the advantage of BRT system far outweighs the disadvantages-- However, some people hold the opposite opinion that BRT system may give rise to a lot of problems, 三.举一反三 [习作1] 假如你是一位导游.通过观察游客的行为变化.说明大众环保意识日益增强.请根据下面表格的中文提示.写一篇短文谈谈此种现象 几年前某些游客的行为 现在大多数游客的表现 乱扔废物.如塑料带.罐头盒.费纸等. 随身带走垃圾. 乱刻乱画.攀树摘花. 爱护花木. 在林中吸烟.引起火灾. 林区不吸烟.以防火灾. [写作内容] 1)请根据以上提示.谈谈这一现象.文章的开头已经给出. 2)文章必须包括所有提示要点.但不要逐条译成英语. [写作要求] 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容. [评分标准] 句子结构准确.信息内容完整和连贯. With the time on, there is an increasing tendency that more and more tourists have been paying greater attention to environment protection. . 【查看更多】
