言以简洁为贵.写句子没有一个多余的词,写段落没有一个无必要的句子.能用单词的不用词组,能用词组的不用从句或句子.如: In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him. 本句的“the fact that he is lazy 系同谓语从句.我们按照上述“能用词组的不用从句 可以改为:In spite of his laziness, I like him. 例1． For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need. 剖析:整个句子可以大大简化. 改为: Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need. 【查看更多】
