2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　 I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.

　　 Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.

　　 No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.

10.　　 [答案]wonderfully改为形容词wonderful

[试题解析]本句中使用形容词wonderful做定语来修饰后面的名词tomatoes。

六（2014浙江卷 ）

　　 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

　　 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　 注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

9.　　　　 [答案]but改为yet或者去掉but　

[试题解析]连词although不能和but连用，因为这两个词都是连词，不能一起连用。可以把but改为副词yet。

8.　　　　 [答案]much改为many　

[试题解析]本句中的many指代可数名词cherry tomatoes的复数形式，所以不能使用much修饰。

7.　　　　 [答案]taste改为tasty　

[试题解析]本句中的形容词juicy和tasty都是形容词和前面的small一样都和系动词are构成系表结构。这些水果很小，但是多汁而且味道很好。

6.　　　　 [答案]somewhere改为everywhere　

[试题解析]根据上下文可知我们让圣女果自己繁殖，所以到处长得都是圣女果。

5.　　　　 [答案]As后面加a　　

[试题解析]考察固定搭配as a result结果是；句义：结果，圣女果长得到处都是。

4.　　　　 [答案]had改为have　

[试题解析]本句的时间状语是all these years，通常和现在完成进行时连用。所以使用have been doing的形式。

3.　　　　 [答案]year改为years　

[试题解析]本句前面的形容词these常常修饰可数名词复数形式，所以使用名词years。

2.　　　　 [答案]by改为of　

[试题解析]考察固定搭配with the help of…在…的帮助下。