九．写作

你校的外教Thomas想了解刚刚结束的英语口语培训班效果，以便制订下一步的培训计划。假如你是李明，是该培训班学员，想再参加写作培训，请按照所给提示用英语给Thomas写一封电子邮件。

1．说明收获　　 2．表达谢意　 3．提出建议或要求

注意：

　　 1．词数：120~150：

　　 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　 3．邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Thomas，

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

　 Yours sincerely，

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Li Ming

[考点]考察半开放性作文

[写作指导]

本文是一封书信，属于应用文格式。要求以李明的口吻给外教Thomas写信，告知本次培训班的收获，并提出建议和要求。所以要使用第一人称，在描述过去这一次培训时，使用一般过去时。在提出建议或者要求时可以使用一般将来时。

要点：1.说明收获。口语得到提高，并交到新朋友；2.表示感谢，希望对方能够再次开设这样的培训班；3.提出建议或者要求：建议对方增加写作方面的培训。

完成本文时要充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

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当我和同学一起的时候，我努力用英语和他们交流，但是我总是犯错误

①When staying with my classmates, I tried to communicate with them in English, but I often made mistakes.

②Staying with my classmates, I tried to communicate with them in English, however, I often made mistakes.

[参考范文]

Dear Thomas,

I’m so thankful to you for your kindness and help in the oral English training course. My spoken English has greatly improved owing to the effective training program, during which I made many new friends.

I used to be shy and un-talkative. When staying with my classmates, I tried to communicate with them in English, but I often made mistakes. Whenever I met with native speakers, I had a strong willing to practise English, but I wasn’t brave enough to open my mouth，which worried me for a long time. Luckily enough, your training course smoothed away all the difficulties. I have benefited from it.

　 Now, I’m glad to learn you are to organize more training courses, and I hope I can get your advice on how to improve my writing. In short, I’m looking forward to more new things in our future courses.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

3．语言通顺，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Dear John ,

　　 I'm very glad to hear that you will e to my city for short-term language training.

Looking forward to seeing you very soon.

_______________________________________________________________________________

　 Yours ,

　 Li Hua

[考点]考察看图作文与提纲类作文

[写作指导]

本文既要考生叙述图片中塔楼酒店的位置，也要根据文字提示说明培训具体情况。要使用第三人称和一般现在时。要点：1，塔楼酒店的位置；2. 住宿费用；每人每天200元；餐厅供餐时间：7：30a.m．一9：00 a．m．；5：30p.m．-8：00 p．m．

在完成图表作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，

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穿过进口的门，你就会看见一栋高楼—塔楼酒店，在它的前面有一个美丽的花园。

①Go through the gate of the entrance, and you will see the high building---Tower Hotel, in front of which lies a beautiful garden.

②If You go through the gate of the entrance, you will see the high building---Tower Hotel, in front of which lies a beautiful garden.

[参考范文]

DearJohn,

I’m very glad to hear that you will e to my city for short- term language training. In your letter, you asked me something about Tower Hotel. Now I’dlike to tell you some detailed information about it.

Tower Hotel is located on Yuanda Road. Go through the gate of the entrance, and you will see the high building---Tower Hotel, in front of which lies a beautiful garden. Behind the building is a swimming pool, where you can go swimming for relaxing. Near the swimming pool stands a dining hall, and there meals are served from 7:30a.m. to 9:00a.m. and between 5:30p.m. and 8:00 p.m.

Last but not least, as to acmodation fees, everyone should pay 200 yuan per day. Ifyou need further information, please enquire at the reception desk on the ground floor when you’ve arrived here.

Looking forward to seeing you very soon.

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Yours,

2．开头已给出，不计人总词数；

2.他们总是尊敬自己的父亲，唯恐他们达不到父亲的要求。

①They often look up to their fathers with respect, fearing that they might not live up to fathers’ expectations.

②They often look up to their fathers with respect , fearing that they might not meet fathers’ demands.

[参考范文]

Possible version:

As we can see from the picture，two people，father and son，are talking to each other．The

boy, standing on the ground, is looking up at his father, slightly scared, while his father, seated high on a big Chinese character “fu”, meaning “father” , is shouting to his son．

Such a situation seems fairly common in our society. When talking to each other, father and

son are not in equal positions. Fathers simply tell their sons what to do rather than listen patiently．Therefore, sons will have few chances to share their own ideas or open up to their fathers．They often look up to their fathers with respect, fearing that they might not live up to fathers’ expectations.

1 hope our parents will listen to us more instead of just giving us orders. 八.（2014年八.豫南五市高三第二次模拟考试）书面表达（满分25分）

　　 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友John近期将来中国参加短期语言培训。食宿被安排在你市远大路的塔楼酒店。他来信询问酒店的相关信息，请你根据以下图示和信息给他写一封回信。要点如下：

。※图示信息

　　 ※住宿费用；每人每天200元

　　 ※餐厅供餐时间：7：30a.m．一9：00 a．m．；

　　 5：30p.m．-8：00 p．m．

　 注意：1.词数120左右；

1.当他们相互交流的时候，父亲和孩子不在平等的位置上。

①When talking to each other, father and son are not in equal positions.

②Talking to each other, father and son are not in equal positions.

3、文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

[考点]考察看图作文

[写作指导]

本文属于看图作文。主题是父母亲和孩子的交流处于一个不平等的状态，父母亲的位置过高，不能设身处地为孩子考虑。导致父母亲和孩子之间的交流不够充分。所以本文属于议论文，使用第三人称和一般现在时的时态。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。

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2、词数不少于120个；

七．Section C

In an English competition, you are required to write an article according to the picture below. Look at the picture carefully and write down how you understand it.

注意：

1、描述图片主要内容，谈谈你的理解及看法；

五．第五部分书面表达

假如你是我市一名高三学生李华，你打算报考一所外语学院。你在网络上看到上海外国语学院的招生信息(admission information)，并对此非常感兴趣。根据招生要求，你需要用英语撰写一份个人申请报告，内容应包括：

　　 1．记述自己的个性特长及取得的成果；

　　 2．说明进入大学后的努力方向及设想等。

注意：1.词数：不少于120；开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

　　　 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm writing to apply to study in your university.

_________________________________________________________________　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours ,

Li Hua

[考点]考察半开放性作文

[写作指导]

本文要求以李华的口吻撰写一份个人申请报告报考上海外国语学院。所以使用第一人称和一般现在时。要点：1．记述自己的个性特长及取得的成果：擅长很多科目，演讲和音乐是自己的特长，多次获奖； 2．说明进入大学后的努力方向及设想等：想在英语方面取得突破，更多与其他国家的人进行交流。

本文对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成本文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。

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1.而且，我曾经赢得在我市举行的演讲比赛的第一名，因为杰出表现被授予最佳辩手。

①What’s more, I once won the first prize　in an　English speech contest held in our city and was honored the Best Speaker for my excellent performances.

②What’s more, I once won the first prize　in an　English speech contest held in our city，honored the Best Speaker for my excellent performances.

2. 众所周知，英语是国际语言。

①As we all know, English is a universal language.

②It is known to us all that English is a universal language.

[参考范文]

Dear Sir or Madam,

　I’m writing to apply to study in your university. I read about the admission information while surfing the net the other day. I’m really interested in it.

　For one thing, I’m an outgoing girl and I can get　on well with all my classmates.　For another, I do well in most of my subjects, especially in English. I like reading English poems and enjoy English movies. Speeches delivered by famous people like Martin Luther. King, President Bush and so on, are also my favorite. What’s more, I once won the first prize　in an　English speech contest held in our city and was honored the Best Speaker for my excellent performances.　

　As we all know, English is a universal language and I like to communicate with different people, so I intend to major in English if I am admitted into your university. I want to have a job related to　languages in the future and I believe I can help promote cultural communication between China and the world.　

　I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.　

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Yours,　

　　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　Li Hua

六（2014届河南省豫东、豫北十所名校高三英语阶段性测试）书面表达（满分25分）

　 请先仔细观察并描述下面的漫画，然后针对这一社会现象写一篇短文，反映人们对

此现象的不同观点并简要陈述自己的观点。

注意：1．词数100左右；

　　 2．开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数；

3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

What should you do if an old man falls down right under your nose?

[考点]考察看图作文

[写作指导]

本文属于看图作文，要求叙述图片内容并陈述个人观点。图表中讲述的正是关于：扶不扶？这一热带社会问题。在叙述图片时，可以使用一般过去时来描述故事。在发表个人观点时，使用一般现在时。要点：1.描述图片：有人看见老人摔倒在地。一个人要去扶。但是周围有人阻止，有人支持。2.发表个人观点：应该去扶。因为帮助他人是中华民族美德，

看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字，再根据这些要点谋篇布局。要求考生把看到的图画用文字表达出来，除了能表达清楚图画中的信息外，考生还需要根据词数要求，适当拓展并发挥想象，从而使文章的叙述不单调。如果是记叙文类的写作素材，考生要注意故事的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、过程、结果这六个要素；如果是说明文或议论文，考生则首先要对图画的内容进行描述，然后围绕图画的信息进行说明或议论。此时考生一定要注意把握图画的中心思想，写出图画要反映的内容。

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大部分人鼓励男孩帮助老人，但是一些人认为男孩不应该提供帮助。

①Most people encouraged the boy to help the man, while some of them thought the boy shouldn’t give a hand

②Most people encouraged the boy to help the man, some of them think the boy shouldn’t give a hand

[参考范文]

What should you do if an old man falls down right under your nose?

An old man suddenly fell to the ground in a faint just in front of the boy.Many people crowded round but nobody would help the old man up.Most people encouraged the boy to help the man,while some of them thought the boy shouldn’t give a hand because he was likely to get himself into trouble since the old man or his family might insist that he knocked down the old man.Even worse,some urged the boy to leave immediately.The boy was troubled by the question as to whether he should help the old man or not.

In my opinion,helping others is a traditional Chinese virtue.We must give a hand to the old and at the same time we must protect ourselves from being involved in trouble.