1.Words and phrases:take,subway,walk,train,by,minute,walk to school,take the bus forty fifty sixty seventy eighty ninety hundred
注意:1. 字数120左右 2. 开头以为你写好,但不计入总词数。
With the approaching of the summer vacation, __________________________________________
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书面表达温馨提示
(1)写好情景作文的要素:语言、要点、细节
●认真审题 ●确定要点 ●描述/叙述具体生动 ●适当细节支撑
●语言结构多样 ●语篇逻辑 ●交际语言得体 ●行文流畅
特别提示:▲用自己能表达的语言表达,不刻意追求高级结构和词汇。
▲注意时态,书写工整,框内答题
(2)写好开放作文的要素:扣题、逻辑、达意
●认真审题/图 ●确定主旨/立意 ●评论扣题/自圆其说 ●结论精彩
能说什么说什么,能说多少说多少,逻辑与达意最重要。
(3)2008高考书面表达试题及优秀作文欣赏(春游图略)
Last week Our class organized a spring outing.To make this memorable activity more wonderful.we discussed the destination carefully and finally decided to go mountain。Climbing instead of other choices like playing in an amusement park and going boating.
With high spirits,we started our spring outing on a fine day.Flowers presented US with their sweetest smiles and we were soaked up in the warm sunshine.However, we were shocked when we reached the top of the mountain.Wasted bottles and used packages were thrown everywhere which totally ruined the beauty of nature.Feeling a great pity for the tourists,we picked up the rubbish and carefully divided them into two groups:recycle ones and non-recycle ones.After that,we put the rubbish into the bins differently.
We call on awareness on protecting our environment which is of great importance.Though clearing up the rubbish was a tough task, our hearts were filled with joy and we will remember this outing forever.
开放作文:(铅笔与圆规图略)
In the picture,we can see a cartoon pencil is running with great effort to draw a square.While a tool used in drawing circles is doing his job in all easy way, feeling quite proud and looking down upon the “silly” little pencil.
This is quite a common scene in the society.Some people are talented and can learn a subject in an easy and perfect way.They can easily get proud and look down upon those who have to make great efforts to do it.In their opinion,those people are too silly to achieve goals.
However, these “talented’’ and proud people don’t understand that even though they can do well in one subject,there are still many jobs that they don’t know how to do,just like the tool used in drawing circles,he can never draw a square that easily.
While those “silly” people,though with great effort,can achieve their dreams in many subjects because of their self-awareness and perseverance.Just like the little pencil,who can draw various shapes.
So don’t be proud when you can do something well.Be patient and work hard,you’ll achieve more goals,especially in studying.
3.你的想法和理由
2.部分同学想去做志愿者工作或是学点技术
1.大部分同学想去旅游
5. In his spare time, Tony travels a lot. It’s hard for his friends to get in touch with him when he’s away. He’d like to find a way to share his travel experiences with his friends and let them know where he is.
A. http://www.ddff.com
The site enables users to keep track of where their friends are and get informed of who is visiting their hometown. Users put in their travel plan and link to their friends. It allows them to see where everyone is.
B. http://www.euke.com
A New York-based Internet businessman once said it was “your place to buy and sell all things handmade”. You can sell everything made by yourself from clothes and furniture to music on Euke.com. This site was founded in 2005 and now has more than half a million users and 60,000 sellers.
C. http://www. momo.com
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C. http://www.png.canwest.come
The site provides a platform for companies and individuals that try to satisfy every need of today’s customers. The practice has moved from the office to the customer’s kitchen and beyond. And the services provided include everything from dog walking to laundry. Founded this year, the site already has nore than 5,000 users.
D. http://www.cosm.com
Instead of marketing videos, Cosm centers on online video diaries. The site has not gone public yet, but has had positive reviews from testers. The website’s founder was once an Internet advisor to an international company.
E. http://www.ttter.com
Ttter enables you to text messages to large groups of people at a time, and for free. Sign up and send it a message, from a phone or the Internet, and it will be sent to receivers. The message is limited to just 140 characters. Set up in March, 2006, Ttter.com has already attracted over 500,000 users.
六、书面表达
第一节: 短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
I often dream of becoming a teacher. I dream of standing on the platform in the classroom or giving lessons to lovely boys and girls. I teach them, playing with them and watch them growing up. I always feel young I am staying with them. I know it is not easy to be a teacher. I have to learn in order to teach. Without the enough knowledge, I can never learn well. What was more, I have to be friend with my pupils and take care of them. Only by this way can I be a good teacher and win respect to them. Therefore, now as a student, I ought to work very hardly to make my dream come true.
第二节:书面表达(满分30分)
即将到来的这个暑假应该是你最没有压力的一个暑假,你是否打算好好利用这个暑假来做一些有意义的或实现自己愿望的事?请根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文。
4. Terry worries about his phone bill every month. As he has lots of friends, making phone calls, sending and receiving messages are a necessary part of his life. Sometimes he has to say hello to each of his friends by mobile phone. It costs him lots of time and money.
3. Monica is clever with her hands and likes making toys. She wants to find a way to show her work to others and share the pleasure with them. If possible, she’d like to make pocket money by selling the toys.
2. As a newcomer to this city, Claudia wants to make new friends with people around her. She likes this city except for one thing, that is, she is not allowed to raise any pet due to the flat rules. That’s too much for an animal lover like her.
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