3.画龙点睛：划线的部分句式比较单调，可以考虑合为一句，运用分词结构。Some of them are very interested in medicine，hoping to relieve more patients of their suffering one day.

[范文]

Dear Liming,

I feel sorry for the dilemma you are facing. In my opinion, if you weigh up the pros and cons of your idea and your parents’, you will find your parents’ makes much more sense. Among my classmates, many choose science, such as chemistry and biology, just because science can provide more and better job opportunities than arts in the long run. Admittedly, some choose their electives on the basis of interest, saying they can enjoy what they are doing. But we may lose interest in what we always enjoy doing one day. Therefore, we cannot fully rely on interest to lead our way. You know the saying that it is no use doing what you like and you have got to like what you do. So it’s my sincere hope that you might just as well follow your parents’ opinion.　

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Yours,

Lihua

[即学即练]

2.误点点拨：① 此处应改为：there is no denying that your interest comes first. There is no doing为固定句型结构。

②in my opinion应改为As for me。in my opinion之后跟的应该是观点、意见之类的

句子，而不应该是一个事实。

③此处应改为：You often get twice the result with half of the effort. 这是倍数表达法的错误运用。

1.总体评价：作者首先提出自己的意见，紧接着以自己和同学为例来进一步论证自己的观点的真确性。最后，从正反两方面假设采用和不采用此观点的结果。评价一篇习作更重要的还要看作者的细节处理，从连贯性上看，作者运用到了不少连接词，例如so, or, therefore, anyway，considering等；从句式结构上看，作者运用到了很多短语，如be addicted to, to the best of one’s ability, feel sick doing, whatever, be bound to等，语言简洁，比较生动。要注意的是，考生在写作中尝试使用了一些语法结构，但有些结构的运用出现了错误，在高考中作文中是比较常见的。因此在写作中要确保你使用的语法结构和词汇是你作文中的亮点，而不是败笔。

2. 结尾语

1) 常用结尾语有：

a. Good luck to you !

b. Please give my best wishes to …

c. Wish you good health and remember me to…!

2) 采用分词短语: 句末多用逗号。

a. Waiting for your good news,

b. Looking forward to your early reply / hearing　 from you,

c. Hoping to hear from you soon,

3) 采用介词短语，句末多用逗号。

a. With best regards,

b. With kind regards to your family,

c. With best wishes to you and yours,

4) 采用完整句子, 句末用句号。

a. We are waiting for your good news.

b. I hope to receive your early reply.

c. We look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.

[例题体验]

假如你是Liming, 你的朋友Lihua就高中选修科目的选择向你征求意见，请根据他发来的email进行回复，词数150左右。

Dear Liming,

Recently our class has been discussing about what electives to choose. I find it so hard to make a decision. You know, my parents put science, such as physics and chemistry, in the first place, but I like arts, especially history and politics. On the other hand, I am not sure whether my choice will ensure job opportunities in the future. What should I do?

Yours,

Lihua

参考词汇：文科 arts　 理科 science　 选修课 electives

[学生习作]

Dear Lihua,

I am sorry to see the trouble you are in. Personally, whatever other reasons, (-2分)①there is no deny that your interest comes first. Let me take my classmates as examples. Some of them are very interested in medicine. They hope to relieve more patients of their suffering one day. Therefore, they choose biology. Some are interested in history. In their eyes, if we treasure history, many problems can be avoided. (-1分)②In my opinion, I put geography in the first place considering that I have been addicted to the mystery of universe since childhood.

Anyway, you can study to the best of your ability when you learn what you like. (-2分)③You often get twice bigger the result with half of the effort. Or if your current choice is only a path to well-paid jobs and your true interest doesn’t lie there, you will feel sick thinking about your classes and homework and your high school life is bound to be dull. (得分档次：第四档20分)

Yours,

Liming

[习作评析]

1.开头语： 1) 常用开头语

a. How are you getting on recently?

b. Many thanks for your last letter.

2) 下面的开头语相当于汉语正式文体中的“某某人敬启”。

a. I write in a hurry to inform you that…

b. I’m very much delighted to inform you that…　

4. 不得缺席，不得在听报告时制造噪音。

要求：词数150左右。

二)书信、电子邮件

书信和电子邮件是日常生活中人们进行交流的主要途径。目前高考中所要求写的信函和邮件的开头和结尾一般在题目中都已经给出，只要求考生写出正文。

书信的开头和结尾可使用的基本用语：

3. 自带凳子、笔记本；结束后写出心得；

2. 4点至5点李阳老师和师生进行互动；

1.下午2点至4点在学校大礼堂听报告；

7.今天是4月10日，本周日李阳老师将来你们学校作关于“The secret to learn English well”的演讲，，请你以学生会的名义用英语写一份书面通知。其时间安排和内容如下：