1.总体评价：作者首先提出自己的意见，紧接着以自己和同学为例来进一步论证自己的观点的真确性。最后，从正反两方面假设采用和不采用此观点的结果。评价一篇习作更重要的还要看作者的细节处理，从连贯性上看，作者运用到了不少连接词，例如so, or, therefore, anyway，considering等；从句式结构上看，作者运用到了很多短语，如be addicted to, to the best of one’s ability, feel sick doing, whatever, be bound to等，语言简洁，比较生动。要注意的是，考生在写作中尝试使用了一些语法结构，但有些结构的运用出现了错误，在高考中作文中是比较常见的。因此在写作中要确保你使用的语法结构和词汇是你作文中的亮点，而不是败笔。

2. 结尾语

1) 常用结尾语有：

a. Good luck to you !

b. Please give my best wishes to …

c. Wish you good health and remember me to…!

2) 采用分词短语: 句末多用逗号。

a. Waiting for your good news,

b. Looking forward to your early reply / hearing　 from you,

c. Hoping to hear from you soon,

3) 采用介词短语，句末多用逗号。

a. With best regards,

b. With kind regards to your family,

c. With best wishes to you and yours,

4) 采用完整句子, 句末用句号。

a. We are waiting for your good news.

b. I hope to receive your early reply.

c. We look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.

[例题体验]

假如你是Liming, 你的朋友Lihua就高中选修科目的选择向你征求意见，请根据他发来的email进行回复，词数150左右。

Dear Liming,

Recently our class has been discussing about what electives to choose. I find it so hard to make a decision. You know, my parents put science, such as physics and chemistry, in the first place, but I like arts, especially history and politics. On the other hand, I am not sure whether my choice will ensure job opportunities in the future. What should I do?

Yours,

Lihua

参考词汇：文科 arts　 理科 science　 选修课 electives

[学生习作]

Dear Lihua,

I am sorry to see the trouble you are in. Personally, whatever other reasons, (-2分)①there is no deny that your interest comes first. Let me take my classmates as examples. Some of them are very interested in medicine. They hope to relieve more patients of their suffering one day. Therefore, they choose biology. Some are interested in history. In their eyes, if we treasure history, many problems can be avoided. (-1分)②In my opinion, I put geography in the first place considering that I have been addicted to the mystery of universe since childhood.

Anyway, you can study to the best of your ability when you learn what you like. (-2分)③You often get twice bigger the result with half of the effort. Or if your current choice is only a path to well-paid jobs and your true interest doesn’t lie there, you will feel sick thinking about your classes and homework and your high school life is bound to be dull. (得分档次：第四档20分)

Yours,

Liming

[习作评析]

1.开头语： 1) 常用开头语

a. How are you getting on recently?

b. Many thanks for your last letter.

2) 下面的开头语相当于汉语正式文体中的“某某人敬启”。

a. I write in a hurry to inform you that…

b. I’m very much delighted to inform you that…　

4. 不得缺席，不得在听报告时制造噪音。

要求：词数150左右。

二)书信、电子邮件

书信和电子邮件是日常生活中人们进行交流的主要途径。目前高考中所要求写的信函和邮件的开头和结尾一般在题目中都已经给出，只要求考生写出正文。

书信的开头和结尾可使用的基本用语：

3. 自带凳子、笔记本；结束后写出心得；

2. 4点至5点李阳老师和师生进行互动；

1.下午2点至4点在学校大礼堂听报告；

7.今天是4月10日，本周日李阳老师将来你们学校作关于“The secret to learn English well”的演讲，，请你以学生会的名义用英语写一份书面通知。其时间安排和内容如下：

2.误点点拨：①处改为：will be reduced from…,此处应该为被动语态。

　　　　　　 ②处改为Just as the saying goes, good health is over wealth。此处使用的仅仅是一个分句，故改为定语从句。

[范文]:

Teachers and fellow students,

May I have your attention, please? It’s now 6 o’clock in the evening. Here is the weather report.

There will be a strong wind from this midnight to two early tomorrow morning and the temperature will drop by 5℃ to 8℃. Also it’s going to be cloudy or there may be light snowfalls tomorrow morning. Therefore, make sure that all the windows and doors are closed when you leave the classroom tonight in case they might be broken by the strong wind. You see, it’s getting colder and colder, so I’d like to remind you that you should put on more clothes when getting up the following morning to protect yourself from cold. After all, good health is of vital importance to anyone. That’s all. Thank you a lot.

Here’s Li Hua reporting.

[即学即练]

1.总体评价：文章为口头通知备用稿。虽然通知单的对象、内容、时间、要求都比较清楚，但通知的格式不正确(-6分)；同时还有句型错误，因此这篇短文按照第三档给分。