4. my 改为 a。keep a diary 为固定短语， 意为“记日记”。

3. anything 改为 everything。此处为肯定句， anything 意为“任何一件事”， 侧重个体； 而 everything 意为“一切事情”， 侧重整体。

2. 删去 in。根据句意及句子结构， 此处为表语从句。

10. real 改为really。此处应用副词修饰谓语动词 don’t need。

NMET 2003

　When I first learned to write in English， I ran into 1. _______

　many difficulties. The main problem was in that I 2. _______

　always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything 3. _______

　into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. 4. _______

　I followed her advice and should put down 100 words 5. _______

　or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on 6. _______

　paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. 7. _______

　One day I wrote a little story and showed to my 8. _______

　teacher. She liked it very much and reads it to the class. 9. _______

　They all said the story was a good one. Their word were 10. ______

　a great encouragement to me.

　答案及解析

9. 删去第二个 to。make sb. do sth. 为固定搭配， 意为“让某人做某事”。

7. On 改为 In。根据上下文逻辑， 此处意为“在一年中”。

6. noise 改为 noisy。noise 为名词， noisy 为形容词。此处应用形容词构成系表结构。

5. program 改为 programs。program 为可数名词， 且根据句意， 此处应为复数概念。

4. read 改为 reading。of 为介词， 后面需要接名词、 代词、 动名词作宾语。

3. 删去 be。此处 may not develop 已经构成谓语动词部分， be 属于多余。