6. can→could　 7. see r→him　 8. a→the　 9. wandered→wondered　 10. other→others

高考英语短文改错课堂练11

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。　　

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

1.as→like　 2. she→who　 3. but→and　 4.去掉the　 5. if前加even　

6. or→and　 7. meal→meals　 8.去掉his　 9. vegetable→vegetables　 10. fruit前加of

No. 6

Last summer vacation, I worked like a volunteer in a hospital, where I met a little girl, Xiaoxiao, she was only seven years old. She just had an operation on her leg but had to stay in the bed for some time. I was amazed by her courage because she never cried if she was suffering a lot of pain. What’s more, I once noticed her helping a little boy whose parents can not come to see her that day. She was sharing her sweets and toys with a boy and telling stories to calm him down. Soon the boy stopped crying. I wandered how many grownups could be as kind as she was to other!

1. of→for　 2. what→how　 3. exercise→exercises　 4. plays→playing　 5. him→himself　

6. the　 7. himself→themselves　 8. led后加to　 9. the→a　 10. danger→dangerous

No. 5

It's important of us to keep healthy. But do you know what to keep healthy? Well, Li Ming gives us a good example. He often takes exercise. He likes sports such as swimming, running and plays basketball. He takes care of him very well. He goes to bed at ten in the evening or gets up at six in the morning. He takes a bath every day and washes his hands before meal. When having his meals, he eats all kinds of healthy food such as fish, meat and vegetable. After meals, he also eats a lot fruit. So he is healthy and strong.

1. had→have　 2. student→students　 3. do→does　 4.去掉that　 5. boring→bored　

6.去掉are　 7. obvious→obviously　 8. it’s→its　 9. them后加to　 10.去掉as

No. 4

Many young boys and girls had the habit of smoking, though they are middle school student. As we all know, smoking do harm to human beings. More and more people have realized that how serious this problem is. But they are never boring with it. Some people think smoking is a kind of fashion, and the others think smoking can refresh himself. In fact, smoking causes many illnesses. The most serious illness led by smoking is lung cancer. Meanwhile, smoking is the waste of money. What’s worse, careless smokers may cause danger fires. 　

1. As→With　 2. what→how　 3. had→has　 4. many→much　 5. interesting→interested　

7. succeed→success　 8. our→us　 9. But→And　 10. we→us

No. 3

Use of Free Time

As the working hours becoming shorter and shorter and holidays becoming longer and longer, what to spend the leisure time had become a hot topic. The use of free time discloses many about one's values, interests and so on. Some might be interesting in movies and television. Sme enjoy sports. Others are like parties or traveling. Obvious, the use of free time is a good means of relaxation. It’s benefits go beyond this. What people do in leisure hours enable them satisfy their wishes. This can contribute to intellectual growth and promote social activities as well as.

1. or→and　 2. think后加so　 3. are→is　 4. clear→clearly　 5. 去掉that　 6. kind→kinds