这是一种隐蔽性较强且年年必考的错误,检查时应通篇考虑,重点在连词、代词,肯定与否定,及相对应的动词如 come 与go 等。
例23.She was smiling but nodding at me.(NMET’2000)
上下文看,应为She---my English teacher微笑且点头鼓励我,but 应为and。
例24.Now someone at home reads instead. (NMET’99)
从上文可知,因为无电视可看,人人都只好读书,someone 改为everyone或everybody.
例25.And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.(NMET’98)通读全文,都是用第一人称,这时突然用到they,显然不一致,应改为we.
[实战演练一]
⑴Most families in China hoped their single children will 76._______
have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. 77._______
So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much 78._______
homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. 79._______
The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No 80._______
wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even 81._______
attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people 82._______
already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. 83._______
Shouldn’t we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our 84._______
government is making out a plan to solve the education problems .85._______
⑵Nowadays, almost every family has TV set, and almost 76._______
everyone likes watching TV. TV has become part of our lives. 77._______
TV has many advantages, for example, it informs us the 78._______
latest news which is happening in the world; it can open our 79._______
eyes, enlarge our knowledge and also help us to see more 80._______
about the worlD. But, it also has some disadvantages. People 81.______
waste too much time in watching TV and his normal life 82._______
and work are affecteD. To the children who they spend too 83._______
much time in watching TV, it can do harmful to their sight 84._______
and healthy. So we should control the time of watching TV. 85._______
⑶ A few months after returning the US from Germany, I took 76._______
part in a college course in French. Since I have learned 77._______
to say German well in Germany, I thought it might be 78.______
interested to begin studying another language. At the 79._______
first class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation 80._______
exercise in it he would say a word or two in French, and 81._______
each student would do their best to copy. When he got to 82._______
me, he kept having me to say more words, and I 83.______
finally asked him why. “I find it great fun,” she explained 84._______
it. “In 25 years of teaching at school, it’s the first time 85._______
I’ve heard an American speak French with a German accent.”
⑷ The Huaihe River has been serious polluted. Day and nigh76._______ millions of tons of waste water is being poured down to from 77._______ hundreds of factories. The waste water is harmful. At present 78._______ there is no fish in it. The river water cannot be drunk. People in 79._______
either bank have to dig wells to take drinking water. The Huaihe 80. _______
River is such dirty and poisonous that people don’t dare swim 81._______ in it. Something must be done to stopping the pollution. The 82._______ government and the people near the river must try to clear water 83._______
as soon as possible. Now special attention has paid to the 84._______
pollution by the government and more scientists. The pollution 85._______
will be prevented in the near future.
⑸ Dear Abby,
How are you? Today I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you. 76._______
I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my 77._______
further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam 78._______
for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However, 79._______
my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me 80._______
going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me 81._______
for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely. They 82._______
can’t imagine a girl so young live alone. They advise me to study 83._______
in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue living with 84._______
them. How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up? 85._______ Best wishes,
Jane
⑹ A person’s age no longer tells you something about 76. ________ his social position, marriage or healthy. There’s no longer, 77. ________
a particular year which one goes to school or goes to 78. ________
work or gets married or start a family. The social clock 79. ________
that kept us on time and told us when go to school, get 80. ________
a job, or stop working isn’t as strong as it was used to be. 81. ________
It doesn’t surprise us to hear a 28-year-old university 82. ________
president or a 35-year-old grandmother, or 70-year-old 83. ________
man who has become a father for the first time. What we 84. ________
all know, public’s ideas are changing nowadays. 85. ________
⑺ It is difficult for parents to teach your children to be responsible 76.________
(有责任的) for housework, but with one of the followed suggestions, 77.________
you really can get your children help you at home. If you give your 78.________
children the impression which they can never do anything quite right, 79.________
then they will regard themselves unfit or unable persons. Unless they 80.________
believe they can succeed, they will never become totally independence. 81.________
Don’t always scold and give lots of praise instead. Talk about 82.________
what they’ve done right, but about what they haven’t done. If your 83.________
children complete a difficult task, reward (酬劳) him with a Sunday 84.________
trip or a ball game of Dad. 85.________
⑻ Before I went to senior middle school, some peoples told 76._______
me. “A life of senior middle school is unforgettable.” 77._______
While I first entered my senior middle school, everything 78._______
seemed unpleasant. Face all the strange things around me, 79._______
I often miss my old friends and classmates. I didn’t want 80._______
to talk others or make friends with others. Little by little, my 81._______
school record went from bad to worse, especially my 82._______
maths. I couldn’t even pass the exam. I lost the heart and 83._______
missed the happy times all day long. I told me, “I don’t 84._______
belong to it. I don’t like the life here.” 85._______
⑼ Tom and Dick are next door neighbour who work 76.________
in the same office so they walked together to and from 77.________
office. Some day as they were walking home together it 78.________
sudden started to rain. Tom quickly opened his umbrella 79.________
and said, “My wife surely has foresight (预见) . She said 80.________
on this morning it would rain and told me to carry my 81.________
umbrella with me.” Dick smiled and walked to him, said, 82.________
“My wife has even great foresight. She told me not to 83.________
carry an umbrella and as she knew you would certainly 84.________
have with you.” 85.________
⑽ Dear Sir or Madam,
I see your advertisement in a student magazine and 76. ______
I’m interesting to know more about your diving courses. 77. ______
First of all, I should explain that although I can swim I’m 78. ______
not very confident in the water. But you mentioned your 79. ______
advertisement that your instructors are full qualified(称职), 80. ______
so I believe they’ll able to teach someone like me to dive. 81. ______
I have one week’s holiday in the three week of June 82. ______
and would like to know that if there’s a course running at 83. ______
that time. How much does a week’s course worth? Finally, 84. ______
if I decide to go ahead, are there any special equipment I 85. ______
need to buy or is everything provided by your company?
I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely yours,
Tom
⑾ Dear Xiaohua,
It is four days since Mother accepted the operation. 76._______
She is feeling much more better. The doctors told me 77._______
the operation was successful, but because her old age 78._______
she had to stay in hospital for other two weeks. The 79._______
doctors also say it was quite necessary for her to 80._______
do so. We expect to get a full report in two and three 81._______
days. Please tell the good news to the rest of family 82._______
as soon as possible. You needn’t to come here. I’m 83. _______
able to look after Mother by myself. You’d better 84. _______
send flowers to Mother. She will feel happily. 85. _______
Yours,
Xiaohui
⑿ Football is most popular game in England: one has only 76._______
to go to one of the important match to see this. Rich and 77._______
poor, young and old, one can see them all there, shout and 78._______
cheering for one side or the other. One of the surprised 79._______
things about football in England to a stranger is the great 80._______
knowledge of the game which still the smallest boy seems 81._______
to have it. He can tell you the names of the players in most 82._______
of the important team, he has photographs of them and 83._______
know the results of large numbers of matches. He will tell 84. _______
you his opinion which is usual as valuable as that of the adults. 85._______
⒀ Climbing is my favourite sport. I am very food it, 76. _______
especially in later autumn. One day early in the morning, 77. _______
my friends and I put on our sports shoes and start off. 78. _______
After climbing for half an hour, we got at the top of 79. _______
the mountain. There we had a good view miles around. In 80. _______
the north, a big river crossed the city. There were many 81. _______
ships sail busily. A lot of beautiful trees were there, too. 82. _______
The sun started to go down, for it was time for us 83. _______
to go back. On the road back, we were laughing and 84. _______
talking all the time. We had a good time on that day. 85. _______
⒁ Before lunch Allen happened to see a man fished in 76.______
a ditch about five metre outside a bar. Allen stopped 77.______
regarded him like a foolish man. Allen’s heart went out 79.______
of him. He said kindly to fish-catcher, “Hello, will 80.______
you please do me a favor and have a drink with me 81.______
in the bar?” The man gladly received his invitation. 82.______
After buying the man several cups soft-drinks, 83.______
Allen asked, “You are fishing there, right? May I 84.______
know how much fish you have caught this morning?” 85.______
“You are the number 8,” said the man humorously.
⒂ What should you do when your parents become angry? If 76.________
your parents got mad, try to have a conversation with them 77.________
about it. Remembering not to shout at them. They usually 78.________
will try to change, but they will take some time because 79._________
they get angry all their life, and that is all they know. You 80._________
might have to change for your method a couple of times. 81._________
Do any nice things for your parents that they don’t expect 82._________
-`like cooking, doing the dishes, washing clothes, or clean 83._________
the floors. If this doesn’t work, bring in friend that you 84._________
feel comfortable, and have him or her help you. 85._________
⒃ In Feb. 2nd 1979, China’s Vice-premier 76._______
Deng Xiaoping was at a visit to the U.S. 77._______
He was in the space flight center near to Houston 78._______
Texas. Sat in the pilot’s seat of a model of 79._______
a space shuttle(航天飞机),he was
asked to touch a button 80._______
to make it landing on the earth from 81._______
a height of 95,000 feet, that he did. From 82._______
windows of the craft, he could see the earth 83._______
coming up to meet him as a returned space pilot 84._______
would see it. Millions of people in both China and
the US watch this on TV with delight. 85._______
[实战演练二]
A
We’ll never forget a day when my classmates and 1. ____
I paid a visit a chemistry factory. It 2. ____
was a large one with nearly 20, 000 workers. It looks 3. ____
like a garden and we saw colorful flowers, grass and trees 4. ____
there. We also visited some workshop and found workers 5. ____
working hard. We talked to them and learned a lot of. We 6. ____
understood them further. On the way home we felt very tiring, 7. ____
but we both thought we had a very good day. 8. ____
We really hoped what we could get more chances 9. ____
of leaving the school and learn about society. 10. ____
B
The children next door often play the football in 1. ____
the garden after my house and sometimes break my 2. ____
windows. Last Saturday afternoon I stay at home and 3. ____
read a book. After a while, I closed my eyes and went 4. ____
to sleep. A loud knock on the door made me to wake 5. ____
up suddenly. Soon a little boy turned out. “You haven’t 6. ____
broken one of my window again?” I asked. “Oh, no!” 7. ____
answered the boy. “Your windows were all opened this 8. ____
time and our football is in your bedroom. Could you 9. ____
mind getting in to get our ball?” I was at a loss at the 10. ____
moment.
C
I ever worked as a tour guide. One day I saw advertisement 1. ____
on the newspaper. I rang up the company, and 2. ____
I was given the job immediate. They asked me to take 3. ____
a tour around the city the next morning. The manager 4. ____
just told me to say anything that I could think about the 5. ____
city. My first tour is terrible. The old bus was not 6. ____
air-conditioned, because it was the middle of summer. It 7. ____
was uncomfortable inside the bus. The tourist soon became 8. ____
very hot and angry. I owned a very hard time. I stayed there 9. ____
for a few weeks,and then left and joined in a better 10. ____
company.
D
Sue and Ann often meet at a cheaper restaurant to eat 1. ____
and talking about life and school after their morning 2. ____
class. Sometimes, instead of talking ,they play a 3. ____
game that they call it “people watching”. They start the 4. ____
game in observing and listening to people around 5. ____
them carefully and make guesses about their lives as 6. ____
ages, jobs, likes, dislikes and so on. Of course, 7. ____
they never really knew whether they are right or wrong. 8. ____
Therefore they usually have good reasons for thinking 9. ____
that what they are. “The game is fun,” they often say. 10. ____
E
At a party, it is quite normal of someone to have 1. ____
a short conversation with you and then go on to talking 2. ____
to other people! Don’t think they dislike you or they 3. ____
are impolite. It has the custom at many parties 4. ____
in Britain, particularly there people are standing up rather 5. ____
than sitting down. Here are two ways of finishing conversation 6. ____
at a party. “Excuse me. I think I’ll go and get another drinking.7. ____
See you later, perhaps?” “Oh. Excuse me. I’ve just seen 8. ____
Mary Jennings over here. I’ve got to discuss a meeting we 9. ____
are been having on Thursday. Would you excuse me for a moment?”” 10. ____
F
I felt sadly yesterday when our teacher told us something 1. ____
about Project Hope in class. It has set up to help the 2. ____
children in the countryside who can’t pay to go to 3. ____
school. After school I came home. I was wondering if I 4. ____
could do something for the Project then I caught sight 5. ____
of money-collecting box on the table. Then I made 6. ____
up my minds to send my pocket money which I 7. ____
had saved for nearly one year for the children who 8. ____
wanted to go to school. I wrote a letter to them and 9. ____
hurried to the post office. Together with the letter I
posted the money and sent with my best wishes to them. 10. ____
G
Last night when Steven and I was having a walk in the 1. ____
Street, we suddenly heard a painful cry for help under 2. ____
a tree nearby. We quickly ran to the tree and found a boy laying 3. ____
on the ground with a stick in his leg. He had fallen of the tree. 4. ____
Steven suggested we pulled the stick out at once, but I disagreed, 5. ____
Because I had learned little about first aid at school. The stick 6. ____
in the leg would help controlling the bleeding. As there was 7 . ____
no telephone,we managed to find a taxi. We took the boy to the 8. ____
hospital. The doctors examined the boy fast and we got to 9. ____
know where the boy lived. So we telephoned his parents
and left after he came to the hospital. We did a good deed. 10. ____
H
Last summer I learnt to ride a bicycle. At first?,I was 1. ____
unable to control its direction. Sometimes I fall to 2. ____
the right or to the left. But I worried my father to tell me 3. ____
how I could ride straightly. He didn’t answer me 4. ____
directly. Instead,he took me to side of the street. 5. ____
“Can you find some bike track that is really straight?” 6. ____
asked my father. I watched more carefully and shook my 7. ____
head .“No?” he said, “in factneither of the tracks is 8. ____
always straight. But just by correct the direction 9. ____
every now and then, you had already gone forward.” 10. ____
I
Boys and girls,
Attention, please. I’ve got a good news for you. A new book 1. ____
How to Improve Your English is now on sell in the 2. ____
nearby bookstore. Xinhua Bookstore. I think the book 3. ____
is a great help on our English study and suitable for 4. ____
us middle school students. Here I’ve got it. You may 5 . ____
go to have a look to see whether you like it or not. The price 6. ____
is five yuan every. Those who want to buy the 7. ____
book should get your money ready for. By eleven o’clock 8. ____
tomorrow morning the money should be give either 9. ____
to me nor to our League Secretary. We’ll go to buy the 10. ____
books tomorrow afternoon.
短文改错专题之答案
1. 76. hoped→hope 77. in→with 78. do→are 79. have前加to 80.
去掉第二个to 81. √ 82. his→their 83. already前加have 84. lesson前加a
例19. I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf. (NMET’2000) 后
跟从句,保持一致须用so…that结构这一固定搭配。as改为that.
例20.I look forward to hear from you soon. (NMET’97)
look forward to 中to 是介词,其后应为动名词hearing。
例21.But it didn’t matter that I would win or not. (NMET’2000)
与其后or not 保持一致时应用whether。
例22.I have neither brothers nor sisters---in any other words, I am an only child.(NMET2001)
in any other words意为“换言之”,应为in other words。
例18.Books may be keep for four weeks. (NEMT’94)
与其主语Books相对应,此处应为被动语态,故keep应改为kept。
例15.The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.
(NEMT’96) The Smiths 为一复数概念,故指代词也应为第三人称复数 their.
例16.I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. (NMET’97)
此处应为作主语的关系代词which.
例17. And I can’t forget the food you cooked for I. (NMET’95)
此处I 应作介词的宾语,故改为me 才可保持一致。
除了例9,例10外,还有
例11.…so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject.(NMET2001)
all 若修饰可数名词时,其后名词应为复数。subject该为subjects。
例12.She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me
success.(NMET2000) all修饰的主语部分应是三者以上,故schoolmate 应为schoolmates.
例13.Unfortunate, there are too many people…(NMET’99)
Unfortunate应作状语,修饰整个句子,此时应为副词unfortunately 才可保持一致。
例14.I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together.(NMET’95) 修饰名词,应为a wonderful time.
例9.We study quite a few subject, such as maths,
Chinese…(NMET’97) quite a few只修饰复数名词,保持一致,subject 应改为subjects.
例10.They … asked me lots of question.(NMET’96)与lots of 保持一致的只能是复数名词,应改为questions.
not only…but also…, either…or…, neither…nor…以及and, but, or 等并列连词或词组连接的结构可称为平行结构。在平行结构中,词性时态等形式须保持前后一致。
例7.Playing football not only makes… but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit.( NMET’98)依据平行一致原则,此处give应与前文 makes保持一致,改为gives.
例8.It was very kind of them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home. (NMET’96) 此句中的drove应与前文to meet 保持平行,故改为drive。
例4.Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library.
(NMET’2000) 主语为A and B时,谓语动词一般为复数,应改为are。
例5.The new boy or girl in school quickly become one of the class after a few games.(NMET’93)主语为A or B时,应由靠近谓语的主语来决定谓语的单复数,become应改为becomes .
例6.Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong… (NMET’98) 此处与例4,例5不同,谓语动词makes与上下文保持一致,为正确的用法,而play须改Playing 才可与此处其它部分一致。
例1. My favorite sport is football. I was a member of our football team. (NMET’98)全文都是一般现在时,此句中was 虽然与上下问不一致,应改为am。
例2. I remembered her words and calm down.( NMET’ 2000)
此处为一描述过去事件的语境,应与前文remembered 保持一致,须改为calmed。
例3. Today, it is much easier to be healthy than it is in the past. (NMET’ 93)第一个is 与时间状语today保持一致,地第二个is则应改为was, 使之与其时间状语in the past 一致。
(四)[实验过程以及结论分析]:(请填写空格①和②)
实验操作 |
预期现象与结论 |
步骤1:用滴管取一定量3mol·L-1H2SO4于试管中,加热煮沸数分钟除去溶于其中的氧气 |
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步骤2:用药匙取少量样品于试管中,用滴管加入适量除去氧气的3mol·L-1H2SO4并加热,充分反应得A溶液 |
固体溶解,溶液颜色有变化 |
步骤3:取少许A溶液于试管中,滴加1-2滴20%KSCN溶液,振荡 |
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步骤4:另取少许A溶液于试管中,滴加1-2滴0.2mol·L-1KMnO4溶液,振荡 |
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