(三)用英语写一个通知。假定通知对象是高一年级学生,内容是5月25日,星期三下午三时,将举行全年级英语考试。考试的内容将包括写各种短语和本学期学过的语法等内容。在复习过程中,同学们如有疑难问题应查阅词典、语法书或向老师请教。这次考试是测试英语知识和能力的重要考试,希望同学们认真复习,取得优良成绩。
要求:1、不要逐字翻译。
2、格式正确。
3、字数在100个单词左右。
4、通知时间4月6日。
参考范文:
Notice
April 6,
The students of Senior Grade One,
Your attention, please. We will hold an English Exam at 3:00 in the afternoon on Wednesday May 25th. The exam includes all kinds of phases and the grammar you learned this term and so on. Everyone should carefully go over your textbook, because the exam is very important and is a test of your knowledge of English and ability. If you have questions, you should go to a dictionary or a grammar book; you can also ask your teachers.
Wish you all do well in the exam. That’s all. Thank you.
习作点评:
本文格式正确,按应用文的格式,标明了通知对象和通知时间。考试性质、考试的范围都交代得清楚,但有些语言有汉语的痕迹,比如“If you have questions, you should go to a dictionary or a grammar book; you can also ask your teachers.”应该说成“If you have any questions, you should turn to a dictionary or a grammar book; and , of course, you can also ask your teachers for advice”会更符合英语的表达习惯。
(二)假如你是陈峰,24岁,正在丹佛大学(Denver University)读书。你会弹吉它(guitar),擅长美国流行歌曲,会打篮球,游泳很好。参加过几所中学二日游活动,作辅导员(coach)。去年暑假在一所培训班教孩子们游泳,培训一个篮球队。你想在暑假期间申请(apply for)一份工作,在报纸上读到下面广告:
Wanted: 80 Holiday Camp Assistant for USA Summer Camps
Age 18-25 male and female
Must be able to do at least some of the following:
*play a musical instrument
*sing
*play baseball/ basketball/ volleyball
*swim
Work is offered during the following periods
June 21-July 20; July 20-August 18; August 18-September 16
Experience preferred.
Write, saying when you can work, and giving phone/ E-mail numbers to:
Holiday Extra, PO BOX 2720, Denver, Colorado, USA
你喜欢这种工作,觉得有意思。 写信申请第二期工作。随信附上你的电话:66776226及电子邮件地址:Chenfeng@.
注意:信的开头已给出,不计入总数。词数:100字左右。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have read your advertisement for Holiday Camp Assistants and would like to …
思路分析:这是一封书信,所以要注意书信的格式;而且要写清楚自己的况,尤其是对其要求比较符合的那几项;文章要包括所要求的所有要点,并加以组织;最后别忘记附上自己的电话和邮件地址。
参考范文:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have read your advertisement for Holiday Camp Assistants and would like to apply for a job during the period of July 20 to August 18. I’m 24 years old, and now I’m studying at Denver University. I’m good at playing guitar and singing American pop music. I can play basketball and swim well.
I went on some two-day school trips as a coach. Last summer I worked in a summer training course, teaching the children swimming and training a basketball team.
You can contact me on the following phone/ E-mail number.
Phone: 66776226
E-mail: Chenfeng@
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Chen feng
(一)根据下面的内容写一篇日记,时间是12月27日(星期二), 天气为晴天。昨天你在电视上看了冬季奥运会,写下你的感想。
1. 比赛很激动人心,所有的运动队都很好。
2. 我国的滑雪队表现很出色。滑得快,跳得高,打败了法国队。夺得金牌。
3. 你也喜欢滑冰比赛项目(event):
(1) 看到很多优秀滑冰运动员;
(2)美国和意大利队都很优秀;
(3)德国队的一名男青年摔断了腿;
(4)一个美国的女运动员滑得很精彩,动作很优美。她最后出场,获得了金牌。
要求:字数100左右。
1. 参考范文:
Dec. 27th Tuesday Fine
Last night I watched the Winter Olympics on television. All the teams were good, and it was very exciting.
Our ski team was excellent. They skied very fast and jumped very well. Last light the French team beat us, but this time we beat them. We won a gold medal.
I liked the skating events too. I saw a lot of skaters. The American and the Italian teams were both excellent. A boy on the German team had a bad fall and broke his leg. A young American girl was excellent. Her back was straight; her arms were beautiful. She was the skaters and she won a gold medal.
2. 习作点评:
本文以日记的形式说明了昨天晚上的冬季奥运会情况,作出了评价,表达了感受,语言简练,内容充实。
(十)10月18日,高三年级一班和二班之间将进行一次有关环保问题的演讲比赛(a talk show on environmental protection)。此前,二班将邀请清华大学的Dr. Li做相关内容的报告。假定你是二班班长,请你草拟一份有关报告会的口头通知。具体内容包括:
报告内容 |
近年来北京环境问题所取得的进步 |
地点 |
教学楼三楼会议厅(auditorium) |
时间 |
10月5日,星期三下午2:00 |
目的 |
帮助大家收集信息,为演讲做好准备 |
参加人员 |
全班同学 |
其他安排 |
会后讨论 |
注意:1. 内容应包括提示及表格内的全部要点;
2. 词数100左右;
3. 开头已给出。
Dear classmates,
May I have your attention, please?
参考范文:
Dear classmates,
May I have your attention, please?
As you know, our class will have a talk show on environmental protection with Class One on October 18. Before it takes place, we will invite Dr. Li from Tsinghua University to give us a talk. He will tell us about the improvement in environmental protection in recent years in Beijing.
The report will begin at 2:00 p.m. on Wednesday, October 15 in the auditorium on the third floor in the teaching building. I am sure we can get enough information from his talk to make good preparations for the coming talk show. Everyone should be there on time please listen to the report carefully and make full notes at the same time.
By the way, we’ll have a discussion after the report.
That’s all. Thank you!
(3)提纲作文
(八)最近,你的父母打算让你出国留学,你与父母的意见相悖,感到烦恼.现在你准备在网上将你与父母的意见发表出来,寻求帮助.请你根据下面的提示,写出100词左右的短文.文章开头已给出.
父母的看法 |
自己的看法 |
1.拥有学习外语的好环境; 2.可以尽早学会独立生活; 3.学习先进技术,有前途. |
自己现有的外语水平不高; 担心遇到无法处理的问题; 对家庭来说留学费用太高. |
My parents have been wanting me to study abroad,
思路分析:
拿到本题目之后,我们应该先分析此题的意图.要求写一篇短文寻求帮助,因此必须得把题目所囊括的内容陈述清楚,这里需要注意的是要在结尾寻求帮助.然后再根据表格内容写出所需要的词汇:limited, communicate, hard, deal with, cost, too much, independent, advanced knowledge, bright future……然后再进行组织写出提纲,可以第一段陈述自己的观点,第二段陈述父母的观点,最后提出寻求帮助.当然也可以先写父母的观点再陈述自己的观点.
参考范文:
My parents have been wanting me to study abroad, but I don’t agree with them.
I think my English is too limited to communicate with foreigners. And I’m not fully developed physically and mentally. So it would be hard for me to deal with the problems I’ll face. Besides, the cost will be too much for my family.
However, my parents think that it’s natural to master a foreign language in an English-speaking country. Worse still, studying abroad at an early age will enable me to be independent. Then it would be easier for me to lean advanced knowledge and technology, which would prepare me for a brighter future.
I really don’t know whether I should obey my parents or not. I need advice!
第二节 开放作文(15分)
请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
You and your Australian friend Jim are visiting a city in China where you see the street sculptures as shown below. You and Jim are discussing what the artist is trying to say. Now you are telling Jim how you understand this piece of art and what makes you think so.
提示词: 雕塑 sculpture
笔记本电脑 laptop
(某城市街头雕塑)
(1)每个句子之间不要长于两行。用你感到舒适的句子。如果你不知道你用的句子结构是否合适,最好别用,把它变成单句。
(2)选用自己比较熟悉的词和句型;用你懂的单词,不要自以为是,似是而非的词不要用。
(3)时间安排:审题3分钟;打草稿、修改15分钟;誊写5分钟;检查2分钟。
(2)解题注意点
无论高考书面表达题属于何种体裁,提供什么样的试题说明,把握如下几个方面,是获得书面表达试题高分的有效措施。
1)紧扣主题,慎重发挥
高考书面表达试题的评分标准是按照要点给分,按大错的数量来确定档次的。所以在写作时一定要紧扣主题,不要随意地去发挥,不要写与主题无关的句子。只要围绕文章的主题,把要求的所有要点概括到文章中去就行了,这样就可以减少不必要的失分。
2)选用常用词汇、短语
写作中,有时某个词、某个句型记不起来了、生疏了或是混淆了,这时就要尽量回避,改用自己熟悉的、有把握的词或短语,尤其要选用积极的动词。一般来说,高考书面表达首先要选择乘法、朴素、准确的大众化词语,避免使用冗长、故弄玄虚的词语。因为高考书面表达的首要标准是看文章能否达意,不出错误。同时不要重复使用词汇、句式。
3)多用短句,慎用长句
高考书面表达只要求写出100字左右的短文,所以在写作时,尽量多用短句来表达,因为长句要求语言技能较高,很容易出现非限定性动词的时态、语态、逻辑主语与句子的主语不一致等错误。既不要选复杂的句子,也不要没把握地使用省略。
4)巧用转折词和总括词
准确使用承接手段才能使意思顺接流畅,否则就难以构成语篇。有转折词语,能帮助读者理清文章的思路。如看到therefore和so 这样的词语,就知道是因果关系;看到but和 however 这样的词,就知道是转折关系;看到later和then就知道事情发行珠先后顺序。写作中只有注意巧妙地使用这些转折接连词,才能更有效地承接上下文,才能更有效地保持文章的连贯性。
5)要点齐全
有些书面表达需写标题,不少考生因审题粗心而漏写。不少应用文需要正确的格式,如通知开头常需交待通知对象;日记开头常需交待时间和天气;信件左上角必须注明写信地地址和写信的时间,下一行要顶格写上称呼,正文结束后,要有结束语,并签名。正文要点要一一落实,不能遗漏。考虑书面表达时应把握不多不少的原则,即不该写的坚决不写。因为言多必失,写出对了不加分,但写错了却要扣分。
6)熟练运用书写技巧
参加考试的学生一般书写已经定型,临场提高的可能性不大。但临场应注意以下几点:(1)注意字母规格大小一致,不要为了直时间,龙飞凤舞,大小写不分,高低不一;(2)力求做到书写斜率一致;(3)保持左右两端上下行对齐,段落开头缩进明显;遇到写错的词,不必抹擦,只要画两条横线就可以,既不影响老师阅卷,也不影响美观。
7)为了在书面表达题材中多得分、少扣分,考生应清楚得分失分的原因:
①扣分原因
写一篇(事先背好的)与之不相关的短文,一分不给。
句子构架搭不起来,意思出不来。如:He went family.
行文不连贯。如:人称使用前后矛盾,词频度过高,不会用连接词语等。
动词谓语缺少。如:He very happy very much.
拼写错误,书写潦草到无法看清、看懂。
语言不行体:不看对象,不看场景,用语不当。
标点混乱,人称代词及时态、语态乱用。
内容要点不全,缺项,整体结构不完整。
文段多于或少于规定的字数(100左右)。
格式不规范,如书信体中漏缺开首词和结尾语等。
②得分条件
行文连贯流畅--人称、时间、地点、情节交代有层次。
使用连接词恰到好处,如使用了and/or /but/so/not only…but also…/in addition (to)/moreover/however/otherwise/nevertheless/like /similarly/in the same way/unless /in case (of)/so long as /on one hand ,on the other hand等词或短语。
词句简明扼要,无或少词语重复。如:The building is being built.可改写成:The building is under construction.
行书整洁,字休规范,会增加良好印象。
尽量写出与题目有关的词语,还可得分。
高考真题
1.全国卷(I)
假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求,写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增减细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好。
June 8
Dear Bob,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
书面表达: 内容要点: 1.图书馆的位置:前有花园,后有教学楼 2.内部环境:宽敞、有书架、报刊、书籍等 3.图书馆功能:借阅、借阅数量和借期 4.开放时间 5.合适的结尾 June 8 Dear Bob, Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library is in the center of the school. There is a beautiful garden in front of it an dour classroom building is right behind it. The library is big. When you get inside, you will see many shelves full of books on different subjects. There are also lots of newspapers and magazines. We borrow books and do some reading in the library. According to the rule, every student can borrow up to 5 books each time and keep them for 10 days. It is open from 9 a.m. to 7 p.m. from Monday to Friday and closed on weekends. We all like our library very much.
Best wishes. Li Hua
2.全国卷(II)
假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求,写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增减细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好。
June 8
Dear Bob,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
书面表达: 内容要点: 1.图书馆的位置:前有花园,后有教学楼 2.内部环境:宽敞、有书架、报刊、书籍等 3.图书馆功能:借阅、借阅数量和借期 4.开放时间 5.合适的结尾 June 8 Dear Bob, Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library is in the center of the school. There is a beautiful garden in front of it an dour classroom building is right behind it. The library is big. When you get inside, you will see many shelves full of books on different subjects. There are also lots of newspapers and magazines. We borrow books and do some reading in the library. According to the rule, every student can borrow up to 5 books each time and keep them for 10 days. It is open from 9 a.m. to 7 p.m. from Monday to Friday and closed on weekends. We all like our library very much.
Best wishes. Li Hua
3.全国卷(III)
书面表达
假定你是李华, 亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办, 现在正在招募志愿者, 你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信. 内容应包括:
1. 个人情况:年龄、性别、学历
2. 个人条件:英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况
3. 承诺:提供最佳服务
注意:
1. 词数100左右,开头语已为你写好
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3. 生词:申请–apply (v.), application (n.);志愿者–volunteer
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. _____________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.北京卷
第一节 情景作文(20分)
国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平、友谊”夏令营活动,要求报名者提交英文个人简历。假设你是王姗,请根据下列信息写一篇个人简历。
注意:1、词数不少于60。
2、可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
10、反复认真检查,修改错误。
(1)要紧扣主题,看要点、内容是否遗漏。
(2)体裁、格式合要求否。
(3)字数。
(4)拼写、时态、语态、语气、主谓一致、非谓语动词、冠词。
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